When Shadows Love - One Shot

Apr 28, 2011 18:10



Title: When Shadows Love

Pairings: Akame, mentions of Pin

Rating: NC/17

Genre: AU; Fantasy/ Senseless Mind Fucking; Mild Horror/ Creepiness; Smut, Angst, Uke Jin.

Summary: Kazuya is all that he has now; imperceptible and terrifying; always a step beyond or behind; ancient and ethereal; the beautiful shadow of his nightmares.

A/N: I just started writing ( Read more... )

when shadows love - fic

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agustin1982 April 28 2011, 18:43:22 UTC
Uwaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Kazuya make me confused??? who is he actually and Jinny...I am happy they to be together^^

Pi so cruel, why you say harsh word to Jin>____<

I LOVE THIS ♥ Uke!Jin!! Yess!!
I LOVE YOU for WRITE THIS ♥

I will waiting for your next update^^

*HUGS*

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redturtleotaku April 29 2011, 14:01:09 UTC
Ah well this is supposed to be quite confusing, I hope that you don't mind.

I was trying to create the feel that sometimes life is confusing and impossible to explain.

Haha Jin just had to be Uke here.

Sorry but this won't be updated it, it was a one-shot.

Thank you as always for reading and commenting!

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moon_catcher April 28 2011, 19:08:57 UTC
I should warn you because apparently, today I suck at commenting not that I'm too much better the other days lol

You totally got me with the atmosphere.... since the very first sentence it was creeping in right under my skin *___*

Kazuya is all that he has now; imperceptible and terrifying; always a step beyond or behind; ancient and ethereal; the beautiful shadow of his nightmares. *insert huge keysmash* why does this sound more tempting than scary?? Am I weird?? O__o maybe just too much Kame biased XDDAnd then the slow change in Jin... how he is afraid and tries to struggle but then surrenders and Kame is not the only one for him ♥ Oh, speaking about the atmosphere, I really love how you didn't explain what/who Kame is and Jin becomes.... and even though I usualy love knowing details in this case it doesn't matter at all!! and the last dialogue just proves it ( ... )

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redturtleotaku April 29 2011, 14:07:25 UTC
You don't suck at commenting at all. I was very happy to receive this - thank you!

I was hoping to make it creepy but tempting at the same time, so I'm glad that you thought that.

I was a little worried about the lack of clear explanation but I felt that might ruin the atmosphere that I was trying to create. So I'm happy that you were still able to enjoy it without total clarity.

Thank you very much. Feel free to ramble anytime! ;D

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geminib April 28 2011, 20:02:02 UTC
God! It's beautiful... Thank you.

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redturtleotaku April 29 2011, 14:08:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment :)

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deshisoraba April 28 2011, 21:58:13 UTC
So beautiful!

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redturtleotaku April 29 2011, 14:09:19 UTC
Thank you :)

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diisa_pinky April 28 2011, 23:43:29 UTC
best ending for this fic ♥

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redturtleotaku April 29 2011, 14:09:49 UTC
You think so? Thank you I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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