Forsaken - Chapter four - Part two

[redturtleotaku]

Dark predatory eyes met his own and he immediately realised that he’d made a mistake. He could see muscles tensing as fury glimmered in the man’s expression. Jin was rising to his feet slowly, eyes unblinking, disbelief clouded only by the anger that he felt at having being disobeyed.

Kazuya stuffed the toy into his robes and stared fiercely back

Comments

[kawaiikame]

Jin is so insecure that it's covering the people's true emotions for him and instead keep thinking that everyone is hating him and doesn't want to be near him .. I feel kind of sad for him exactly, it must be hard for him to deal with all the mess around him a lone and afraid to trust any human being. Pi ... what can I say about him, instead of making it better he made it worse.

I'm so hooked up with this story! I'm pretty much looking forward to read more! I hope you'll update the next chapter faster :3 ♥

[darkangel265]

wait what! huh! Jin is too confused that he sent kame away. ahhh i want to punch Jin now. Im going to save you Kame. (not really)
its so good. i want more now.
update soon

[kurakura_chan]

i thought at first kame did it because he wanted too.
but then i knew it was because he feel the need to pleasure his lord.
i feel sorry for jin :(

waiting for another update ^^

[suju786]

TT_TT Awww! poor baby! Don't worry Kazu-chan! all will end well somehow!!- JINJIN YOU BIG MEANIE!! DONT HURT THE PERSON YOU LOVE! YOU'LL DRIVE HIM AWAY!!! XO

Thank you SO MUCH for sharing!I've really been enjoying the story so far, so I'm dying for the next update ♥

[jinkazuaffair]

i just hope that no one would take kazaya aside from Jin. its just a misunderstanding.poor jin...poor kazu....but at least it was jin who had taken him and i hope it would only be him...hmm sad...