Forsaken - Chapter four - Part two

[redturtleotaku]

Dark predatory eyes met his own and he immediately realised that he’d made a mistake. He could see muscles tensing as fury glimmered in the man’s expression. Jin was rising to his feet slowly, eyes unblinking, disbelief clouded only by the anger that he felt at having being disobeyed.

Kazuya stuffed the toy into his robes and stared fiercely back

Comments

[natasiamarpaung]

;_; they need to be honest to each other and show their real feelings
can't wait for next :3
thank you for updating <3

[stelladell]

Poor things, both so confused and hurt. Makes for good story though ;D

[sheenalinh]

finally i have time to read this.
The pace of their emotion towards each other was kinda fast for me in chapt 2 and 3 but you make it really gud in this. At least, towards the end it's really gud.
Kame really lied to Jin, not by the fact that he did his job, but by the fact that he really wanted Jin. Maybe his ego was still so huge and his mouth always slipped wrong things.
The smutt was hot, and I feel sorry for Jin.He would regret this decision soon, to have his boy served other clients. I'm waiting for the next update.
♥

[kaze_no_hisui]

jin why you do that? why don't you just keep him and make him fall for you?
is kazuya start to fall for jin? or he just does his job (it seem like kazuya's denial for me ^^)??
can't wait what happen next to akame ^^v

[ashurichan24]

Oh no Jin! Kame was being sincere don't do this!
Kaaaammme I feel sad. Jin don't jump to conclusions