cant explain my feels but i loved this. it was sad yet gives this fulfilling emotion. I dunno how to explain exactly coz my english isn't good. Hehe But two thumbs up! ヽ(；▽；)ノ Loved this
you weren't lying when you said it was angsty, lol
more seriously though, i really really liked this. it was so well constructed and the imagery... this ust have been a bitch to write, lol i love how you slowly unraveled the truth behind jongin's actions, how he wasn't just someone choosing to drown into the loss of someone important to him, that sehun was more to him than most people thought, that his departure wasn't an accident at all and more importantly the way he left. i'm surprised jongin isn't moe fucked up than that after the stunt sehun pulled on him. it was more than cruel for him to leave like that: suicide is already a very cruel and selish thing to do, but to kiss jongin, more or less confess to him right before running away then the phone call? sehun was really a bastard
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Oh really? The plot seems so intricate emotionally wise all the while flowing nicely, don't worry ;) I thought it was kind of a draining experience. "Oh, Jongin is in therapy I guess. Hmmm let's make this Sekai, no wait, he's dead, let's add Kyungsoo" ROFL I love how the muses seem to know better than us, lol
Oh, I'm sure Sehun had his reasons otherwise he'd be pretty sick bastard but really, Sehun? Really?
You did that really well hon', don't worry ^^b I didn't mention it before, but does it have to do with the fight Kyungsoo and Sehun had? and how he kept Jongin busy so he wouldn't spend time time with the other? I don't know why I have a feeling Kyungsoo wanted to confess before he left or something... Anywho, I think too much ^///^
*nods nods* not to mention the fact that it's the kind of things people tend to keep to themselves. Besides, you managed to convey Kyungsoo's secretive nature with how he hid his feelings to Jongin.
I noes! DX I try to stop myself fro doing so, but sometimes it's just too hard >< especially when it
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Well, i mean, after I wrote the first few paragraphs and got to the part where he met Kyungsoo I semi-planned it.... But it was more of an "oh I want to write this scene" so I'd go and write it and then have to find a way to connect it all together
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it was sad yet gives this fulfilling emotion.
I dunno how to explain exactly coz my english isn't good. Hehe
But two thumbs up! ヽ(；▽；)ノ
Loved this
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Lol you could always just say whatever you want and then I can put it into google translate and see how accurately it translates it lol.
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more seriously though, i really really liked this. it was so well constructed and the imagery... this ust have been a bitch to write, lol
i love how you slowly unraveled the truth behind jongin's actions, how he wasn't just someone choosing to drown into the loss of someone important to him, that sehun was more to him than most people thought, that his departure wasn't an accident at all and more importantly the way he left. i'm surprised jongin isn't moe fucked up than that after the stunt sehun pulled on him. it was more than cruel for him to leave like that: suicide is already a very cruel and selish thing to do, but to kiss jongin, more or less confess to him right before running away then the phone call? sehun was really a bastard ( ... )
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"Oh, Jongin is in therapy I guess. Hmmm let's make this Sekai, no wait, he's dead, let's add Kyungsoo"
ROFL
I love how the muses seem to know better than us, lol
Oh, I'm sure Sehun had his reasons otherwise he'd be pretty sick bastard but really, Sehun? Really?
You did that really well hon', don't worry ^^b
I didn't mention it before, but does it have to do with the fight Kyungsoo and Sehun had? and how he kept Jongin busy so he wouldn't spend time time with the other? I don't know why I have a feeling Kyungsoo wanted to confess before he left or something... Anywho, I think too much ^///^
*nods nods* not to mention the fact that it's the kind of things people tend to keep to themselves. Besides, you managed to convey Kyungsoo's secretive nature with how he hid his feelings to Jongin.
I noes! DX I try to stop myself fro doing so, but sometimes it's just too hard >< especially when it ( ... )
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