Thunderstorms and Heartbeats - Baekyeol

Sep 09, 2012 00:25

Title: Thunderstorms and Heartbeats
Pairing: Baekyeol
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He lets Chanyeol teach him how to love the rain the way that Beakhyun teaches him to love the sun.

Thunderstorms and Heartbeats )

rating: pg-13, fandom: exo, length: oneshot, pairing: baekyeol

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delvae September 9 2012, 16:29:10 UTC
(you know who I am, right? ^^)

awwwwwwwww *-*
that was so beautiful!!

"but Baekhyun’s pretty sure that he doesn’t need a sun if he has Chanyeol because Chanyeol can shine brighter than anyone else."

I want to hug those words and press them close to my heart <3 so beautiful <3

and the ending was so wonderful! I mean... rainbows! oh please, some rainbows! what a wonderful image <3

And I really loved how you wrote the first passage again from Baekhyuns view <3

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reebeegee September 9 2012, 16:44:15 UTC
Yes, I know who this is :D

I'm so happy you liked it! For once, since my Taoris, I didn't write something depressing. Are you proud of me? XD

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delvae September 9 2012, 17:56:10 UTC
really really proud! :D *gives you a cookie*

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reebeegee September 9 2012, 18:16:57 UTC
Mmm now I really want a cookie lol.

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pollutedlungs September 9 2012, 17:46:29 UTC
i get your struggle writing positive things lol. i dunno, it's use difficult to not write something depressing or srs bsns
OK SO. THIS WAS SO CUTE.
the breakfast couple is seriously one of my favorites and they're just kinda... perfect for each other? idk
saying 'i love you' to your partner really is a big deal, and they both have a good enough reason not to have said it face to face yet. but the whispering late at night was such an adorable touch kjfshgkjsdf
I LOVED THIS AND I LOVE YOU.

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reebeegee September 9 2012, 18:20:55 UTC
Hehe yeah, it's hard. Probably aslo doesn't help that my favorite fics are the depressing ones lol.

Yes! The breakfast couple is amazing~

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. I really appreciate it :)

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envybleedsgreen September 9 2012, 19:06:29 UTC
My heart is sobbing. ;-; I'm sipping hot tea here and curling up to this fic. <3

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reebeegee September 9 2012, 19:19:27 UTC
Oh my gosh, noooo! Don't sob! It's a happy fic (or it's supposed to be)! (unless it's happy sobbing?)

But I approve of the hot tea part :) Now I really want some tea.

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envybleedsgreen September 10 2012, 00:49:44 UTC
HAPPY SOBBING. GWRNUGNGNUIANUA. I WASN'T FEELING WELL TODAY [BECAUSE MY HEALTH ISN'T THE GREATEST, TO BE HONEST], SO TEA + THIS FIC REALLY CHEERED ME UP.

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reebeegee September 10 2012, 01:42:21 UTC
Ah okay good :D

I hope you're feeling a bit better now :)

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piemin September 10 2012, 13:33:08 UTC
can i be your best friend or something sldkfjskljfhsd this is definitely the cutest thing i've read this month...so far! ;OOOO; and i just adoreeee the way you began this fic with "For Chanyeol there are a million reasons to love rainy days, but most of them involve Baekhyun." then kinda ended it with "There are really only a few reasons for Baekhyun to love rainy days and it’d be a lie to say that none of them involved Chanyeol." it's like a perfect balance, something soulmate-y i can't even explain, i love it so much!

thank you for the perfect piece of writing i honestly to read more of your lovely writing~ ♥

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reebeegee September 12 2012, 17:36:35 UTC
Lol just because of this fic? XD

Thank you for reading :D I honestly haven't written very much :/ But feel free to read it lol. I feel kind of embarrassed when I look back at older things, but I think my writing has hopefully gotten better....

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wookiescookie September 10 2012, 14:48:53 UTC
this was so sweeeet i love it <3
the way their relationship is made parallel to the weather is so well-written and very pretty ;;;;;;
i hope they get to say i love you tho huhu
this was so fluffy thanks for the read!! <333

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reebeegee September 12 2012, 17:37:26 UTC
Teehee maybe they do :D We'll never know for sure but you can always pretend they do lol.

Thanks for reading!

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