My metal

[reef4definit]

I was up the whole night, sanding and welding.
It is beautiful, this hard slab.
The metal keeps my body.
It holds me together, I am safe.

Your eyes are neutralized.
Leaving no marks on me.
My metal breathes the words,
So they don't end up in my ears.

Cold and safe.

Comments

[purestglory]

ohhhh my god. the first line is perfect, it's a really good like, "hook." and just all the imagery with metal is so well done, you set up this incredible connection between something lifeless and your body/emotions. it's just enough, but i still want more.

just. so good. (please teach me.)

[reef4definit]

eeeeh, thank you wheeneeets!