One Republic - All the Right Moves

[snoozing_kitten]

Title: Puppet Show
Pairing: Yamapi/Koyama
Rating: PG
Summary: AU (anti-cyberpunk?). Koyama isn’t nearly pragmatic enough for what he’s doing.
Notes: Many thanks to my beta!

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Comments

[sanjihan]

So I love this song. And I love this fic. Which is probably no surprise to anyone considering the pairing and the premise. XD I LOVE what you did with the MV, changing it into an interesting sci fi future that I think you did really well working into the fic without being awkward about it.

Of course they are, Koyama thinks. Aside from Shige (who isn’t an actual member of the band but needed to be present), none rely on TEC to aid their music.

“It’s because they’re not perfect,” Koyama agrees, then winces.

...

Massu’s level of passion is something of a faux pas, these days
I think this bit is what really did it for me, though. Neatly showing how passion and creativity in this world have been relegated to the backseat, pushing predictability and efficiency to the forefront of things deemed important, without forcing the idea.

And then of course the quiet, unsure feeling to the KoyaPi. <3

I loved it. Thank you!

[lemonadetea]

&hearts Thanks for putting up with all my whining!

[dw9lives]

Really enjoyed this! I loved how Pi knew and knew for a while. Very cute, loved it! :)

[lemonadetea]

Thanks!

[vierran45]

I really liked this. Thank you!

[lemonadetea]

Thanks for reading! :3

[carmine_pink]

So I continue to be amazed at how creative people are in writing sci-fi AU fics, and this one is no exception. Loved the premise, loved the pacing and gradual elaboration of the whole universe -- telling just enough for us to be intrigued. Loved the KoyaPi, of course. <3 Thank you!

[lemonadetea]

I have to tell you that I was really amused we both picked Keisuke as an alternate name for Koyama. XD

Thanks for reading!

[carmine_pink]

I know right??? Telepathy, we totally has it. ;D