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Apr 19, 2006 11:55

yeah. it's mine. it sucks, but i own it. blame my ex fiance. he always said i needed to be less giving of myself to others, and this is how i felt about that...

Personal savior walking by,
ignoring pleading hands.
Once offered hope,
offer now withdrawn.
Give and give,
‘til take weakens all.
Wandering lost, looking to share.
Sitting in grief, ( Read more... )

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kristymccracken April 19 2006, 18:35:03 UTC
Ahh! Finally. I've been dying to read something of yours.
That was really good, well written. The last line...the best.
Listen to me like I'm some critic...ha!
Again, really good job.
TTFN<3

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reese85 April 19 2006, 18:37:22 UTC
thanks doll.
it's nto one of my favorites, but it was short and i thought it wasn't the worst one either...
im glad you think it's ok.
coming from you that's wonderful for me to hear :D

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kristymccracken April 19 2006, 18:41:07 UTC
haha, well thats good.
i sent you an email.
I have to get off the computer...
Boo..
But i'll be on tomorrow...
TTFN<3<3<3

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