Aishiteiru, Goshujinsama - Ch. 17/?

Jun 11, 2013 09:16

Yes, yes it's been a while. But what I've missed in time I hope to make up in words. This is one of my favorite chapters (because of how key it is and how it changes the entire dynamic of the story so far) and the different format took a while to put together. Wanted to be sure I'd done it right.

Special mention to gambitsfox and senna23 for guessing my favorite ( Read more... )

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himitsu_17 June 11 2013, 14:22:08 UTC
It's nice to know and read Oh-chan's point of view and their meeting, to read his past and his story.
I can't wait to read more and more of this~

Thanks!! :D

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regaime September 17 2013, 03:02:57 UTC
You're welcome!! Yeah, it was refreshing coming from the opposite angle, especially since...it's REALLY hard to convey Ohno's feelings and thoughts when he doesn't speak and the story is from Nino's POV --_____--

Thanks for reading ;Dv

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haianh0402 June 11 2013, 14:43:01 UTC
Yay for the new chap! I enjoyed the writing style you used for Ohno's PoV very much!

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regaime September 17 2013, 03:03:13 UTC
Aww, thanks!!

And thanks for reading :)

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matsuaurore June 11 2013, 14:52:01 UTC
OMG fuck, shit kyaaa I thought about this sentence firstly but I changed my mind at the last minute T.T xDDD it was my favorite sentence too xD by the way thank you for this new chapter, I'm impatient for the next ^^

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regaime September 17 2013, 03:04:20 UTC
lol!! I know right.... >___>

thanks for reading! :D

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smile_arigatou June 11 2013, 15:23:29 UTC
yay!! I'm happy that you updated because for a couple of days I've been stalking the ohmiya lj just waiting for this xD
This chapter is amazing~ it's finally nice to know what happened to Ohno and know what he thought about everything. I'm also very glad Nino found him or else he could have been gone by now.
thank you for the update. update soon~!!!

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regaime September 17 2013, 03:05:53 UTC
Haha, you must have 'fic sense' or something. >____> (yup, i went for that bad pun XD)

Thanks for reading!!!

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carey_chan June 11 2013, 21:10:42 UTC
reading this hurt a lot,cause of the pain ohchan had to go through. It might sound weird but I`m kinda relieved that satoshi wasn`t as broken as he seemed to be at the beginning. For now we know that he 'pretended' to be far more broken. But somehow he has an inner strengh. even though he was wishing for the end.he still had something inside that kept him going.
As for the suica-card: it was launched in 2001 but who cares ^,~

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regaime September 17 2013, 03:09:42 UTC
OH...WOOOPS XD

weeeell, in this alternate universe...apparently JR is a little more on their game >___>

(Where'd you find that anywhoosle?)

Thanks so much for reading!! (and caring enough to point out my mistakes XD)

On a more serious note...I think I fell completely in love with that inner fire Ohno has in this chapter. And it was something that just suddenly emerged from his character, like...oh that makes perfect sense, AND i get to mind-fuck everyone?? AWESOME. That was my thought process, anyhow. ;P

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carey_chan September 20 2013, 19:31:41 UTC
I just read through some stuff and finally found the information <3

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