i will never leave this place

Jan 26, 2004 23:42

what am i but a vessel?

just let me forget
what i seek ill never have
always out of reach
i am the mountain to her,
ephemeral, she is mist

someone understands this one more than others:

ill never leave here
i am floating through these walls
join me in my cell

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dream42886 January 27 2004, 20:59:00 UTC
Wonderful haiku ben. It completey explains the way you feel about this person and i'm sorry it has to be that way. Hopefully things will change for ya man, cause you deserve someone great ben. I totally undersand the way you feel in this poem, it really does suck ya know? Your very creative ben and good job on the haiku. love ya man.

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wangfrenzy January 29 2004, 23:15:21 UTC
WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!~!! me!

i understand that haiku better than most would. :)

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anonymous January 31 2004, 23:11:11 UTC
It reminds me of that Emily Dickinson poem "I Died for Beauty--But Was Scarce". you'd have to read it to understand.

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