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anonymous January 8 2005, 01:13:47 UTC
hmmm, i've heard better

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coconutshampoo January 8 2005, 15:15:45 UTC
very cliché. to make them more different instead of just saying bluntly stuff like 'i miss you' say in it a way that makes it more and insteresting and thought provoking. use metaphores.
there's my two pennies anyway
good luck :)

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coconutshampoo January 8 2005, 20:16:54 UTC
i agree, i think this song is pretty good, i would like to hear it

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seraphscoal January 9 2005, 12:38:14 UTC
They're good. I don't agree with what the people above me said, don't make it more thought provoking, make it what you want to make it. A song is the person's who writes its way of getting what they want to say across. So just do what you're feeling.

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