very cliché. to make them more different instead of just saying bluntly stuff like 'i miss you' say in it a way that makes it more and insteresting and thought provoking. use metaphores. there's my two pennies anyway good luck :)
They're good. I don't agree with what the people above me said, don't make it more thought provoking, make it what you want to make it. A song is the person's who writes its way of getting what they want to say across. So just do what you're feeling.
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there's my two pennies anyway
good luck :)
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