It's a Mafia Life (7-8)--KHR Fanfic

[reidluver]

Title: It's a Mafia Life
Author: Reidluver
Pairing/Characters: Um...pretty much all of them (characters I mean)
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Spoilers for Future Arc

Summary: As Christmas draws near, TYL!Tsuna starts thinking his Guardians would have been better off without him. But would they? Tsuna's about to find out when his Guardian

Comments

[reidluver]

Heh, yeah that's the point. XD I scared myself writing him! Glad you like the story!

[reidluver]

Uh...you mean like in a journal entry? Like a link to the rest of the journal entry so the whole thing doesn't appear on the post on your main page?

[bloodtaki2]

You have no idea how much I want to slap Tsuna for his stupid actions. But oh well, there's a purpose for the plot. And anyway, he's so naive, that was expected. Xanxus talking to Tsuna was the icing on the cake.

I was pleased with the idea that Yamamoto was still in touch with Hibari. You bring interesting theories about what the guardians life would have been if they never met Tsuna. I wonder if you will surprise me with Kyoko's life. I have my idea, but we'll see!

I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

[reidluver]

XD Yeah, Tsuna was kind of stupid for thinking that, but he cares too much for his Family. He needs to realize his own worth, the poor guy. Once this story is over though he'll DEFINITELY understand how important he is to them.

You do? Thanks! Yeah, I feel that Hibari and Yamamoto would get along in those circumstances. The most fun part of this story was coming up with all the scenarios! And we'll have to see about Kyoko! :)

Thank you so much for your kind comment!

[rade_zahitya]

Hmm...Hibari going mad is EPIC!! xD I am speechless enough to make you realize that your work is breathtaking as always xDD
No I'm not flattering you, it's just the fact (for me)!

You know what, I'm more curious about what happened to Gokudera from before, didn't he was supposed to find and fight Yamamoto? Or did Byakuran the Almighty summoned him back?

Aaand, I'm still waiting for the super ultra touching scene! While I'm not proficient at writing in English, I do write in my own mother language so...
lemme say this: emotion build is good, and if done right it could make an extremely EPIC climax. But overstretch it and you'll lose it all! OwO

Maybe, make something different about the next meeting with Kyoko/Ryohei/Mukuro/Chrome?

P.S: I wonder what happened to I-Pin

[reidluver]

Really? Thanks! So glad you enjoyed mad!Hibari! XD Oh, and thank you so much for the kind comment!

Well, as for Gokudera, above I showed that he went back to Byakuran to report meeting Tsuna and Byakuran knew exactly who he was, so he abandoned his mission against Yamamoto to tell his Boss that. But it doesn't mean they still won't fight...

Heh, well you might have to wait a while for the touching scene. ^^; Everyone's going to get worse before it gets better! Though there are a few touching scenes scattered throughout I guess. Oh well. Don't worry! I won't overstretch it. :)

And there will be different about their meetings. :) Kyoko and Ryohei are next, and they'll be up momentarily. Oh, and we find out what happens to I-Pin as well!

[rade_zahitya]

yayy!! Glad to hear that!
Let's just wait for things to heat up, eh? xD