Revision RequestreimsadminJuly 9 2011, 17:14:09 UTC
REVISION REQUEST After reading over and discussing your application, we would like a few revisions. They are as follows:
We are very concerned about the character's PTSD diagnosis, because what's given in the AU history doesn't reflect the diagnostic criteria. While we understand that the events in the history - particularly those around her mother's death - were serious, we feel that they don't fit with a PTSD diagnosis; extended grief would seem to fit better.
The character's money situation seems to contradict itself - if the family is wealthy, why would her brothers need to get jobs?
The personality section is contradictory, particularly with regards to both being laid-back and blowing up at others easily. We'd like to see this evened out.
Please have your revisions submitted within one week from this notice. Should you have any questions or need clarification, please contact us.
I hope I fixed this up to your liking! I also added a few things to her personality and history sections - after playing her in a few dressing rooms, I found out a little more about her character, I guess. :)
Application Accepted!reimsadminJuly 10 2011, 16:29:37 UTC
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Application Accepted!reimsadminAugust 13 2011, 08:09:56 UTC
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Application Accepted!reimsadminAugust 13 2011, 08:10:27 UTC
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REVISION REQUEST
After reading over and discussing your application, we would like a few revisions. They are as follows:
- We are very concerned about the character's PTSD diagnosis, because what's given in the AU history doesn't reflect the diagnostic criteria. While we understand that the events in the history - particularly those around her mother's death - were serious, we feel that they don't fit with a PTSD diagnosis; extended grief would seem to fit better.
- The character's money situation seems to contradict itself - if the family is wealthy, why would her brothers need to get jobs?
- The personality section is contradictory, particularly with regards to both being laid-back and blowing up at others easily. We'd like to see this evened out.
Please have your revisions submitted within one week from this notice. Should you have any questions or need clarification, please contact us.Reply
I hope I fixed this up to your liking! I also added a few things to her personality and history sections - after playing her in a few dressing rooms, I found out a little more about her character, I guess. :)
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Congratulations! Your application has been accepted. Please respond with your character's journal name. Once you've completed that, please join reimsacademy, reimsactivities, reimsassembly and, optionally, reimsantics.
Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to roleplaying with you.
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Congratulations! Your application has been accepted. Please respond with your character's journal name. Once you've completed that, please join reimsacademy, reimsactivities, reimsassembly and, optionally, reimsantics.
Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to roleplaying with you.
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Congratulations! Your application has been accepted. Please respond with your character's journal name. Once you've completed that, please join reimsacademy, reimsactivities, reimsassembly and, optionally, reimsantics.
Also, please comment to the Taken List by Canon and Student/Faculty Directory. Check out your Room Assignments and please visit the Official History-Making Meme to establish existing CR should your character not be a new transfer.
We appreciate your effort and look forward to roleplaying with you.
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