A special kind of bond [ 2 / ? ]

[reishicolleen]

Title: Bonded
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Rating: M
Chapter rating: T
Pairing/s: Hibari Kyouya X Tsunayoshi Sawada (main 1); Yamamoto Takeshi X Gokudera Hayato (main 2); others to be revealed later. And hints of everything else in between.
Warning: Yaoi, Language, OOC,  and a sadistic Xanxus.
Beta: Far-Fetched Imagineer
Disclaimer: I do not own any of

Comments

[hitzusin]

Yay new chapter! I meant to reply to the first one, but internet was being stupid and kept going out.

I like the progression of the story and how you write the characters, however I find the random bits of Japanese (not counting '-san', -'sama', or any other honorific) to be out of place in the story. It might be a good idea to omit that, as there might be a chance (though highly unlikely now a days) of people not knowing what those words mean, and wouldn't understand them. =)

Otherwise I really like it so far! Yay 1827! There needs to be more of this pairing!