021. Park Benches, Yesung/Kyuhyun

Oct 10, 2008 15:00

[021] park benches. [g]
yesung/kyuhyun.
5/100 done on 21.10.08
I was really frustrated. And when I'm frustrated I write really short things. So this was what came from this particular bout of frustration.

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Yesung liked going to the park. He was a musician, and he always explored places for inspiration for his music pieces. Of late, the park was ( Read more... )

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mikudaisuki October 22 2008, 00:30:36 UTC
I love this, it's lovely the way you portray yesung and how kyu has been observing him. The way you write flows smoothly. I like that.

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reissaidan October 22 2008, 06:17:17 UTC
It does? O.o xD Wow, thanks! I find that the way I write is a bit complicated & I usually worry readers won't get what my story's about. But I'm glad you like my style. <3 ♥

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kim_hae_eun October 22 2008, 04:08:55 UTC
*SQUEALS LIKE THE TOTAL FAN GIRL I AM*

OMGOSH!!!!!!!!!! KYUSUNG!!!!!!! YEHYUN!!!!!!!!!!!
SOO CUTEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

...a lonesome figure like him with a notebook and pen in hand and pushing up his smart-looking glasses from time to time while the wind blew and scattered fallen blossoms softly upon him definitely looked like the main character of a romance story...
maybe true but you'd be the HOT lonesome figure!!!

I've been watching you
first thought that came to mind when i read that -- STALKER! LOL
aww kyu being a stalker! LOl that's a first! well noo this would be the 2nd that i read of him being one but stalking SUNGIE is a first!

SUNGIE! why cant you believe ppl find you interesting?? LOL it's possible! no it's true!!!!!!!! LOL

he's your muse.
Cho Kyuhyun. Your friend. the person who understands you. understood you. the you in your own world without ever talking to you in the real world. your muse!!!!!!!!!!1

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reissaidan October 22 2008, 06:25:06 UTC
*SEES THAT kim_hae_eun IS A TOTAL FANGIRL & APPROVES WHOLEHEARTEDLY*

YES! KYUSUNG!! YEYUN!! <3 I LIKEY THIS PARTICULAR KRY!PAIRING FOR SOME REASON.

maybe true but you'd be the HOT lonesome figure!!!
Now you make me want to watch a clichéd romance story with Yesung as the main char/lonesome figure. xDD

aww kyu being a stalker! LOl that's a first! well noo this would be the 2nd that i read of him being one but stalking SUNGIE is a first!
STALKER!KYU = WE NEED MORE OF THAT.
Especially when it comes to stalking Yesungie. Who wouldn't stalk Yesung?! xD

why cant you believe ppl find you interesting??
LOL! Yes, Yesung is a dork after all, he should know he's interesting!

the you in your own world without ever talking to you in the real world.
...I'm still trying to get what it means. x'DDD

Thank you for the long comment! <3 ♥

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kim_hae_eun October 23 2008, 00:59:26 UTC
LOL hahhaahhhaa! agrees with you too!

I KNOW!!!! JUST SOMETHING ABOUT THAT!!!! <33333

LOl hhahahhhaaa! me too! whether he's the main char/lonesome figure doesnt really matter cuz he'd still be hot!!!! and that cliched romance story better not end with him alone!!!!!

TOTALLY!!!!!!!! soo need more of stalker!kyu!
anyone who isnt frickin living wouldnt stalk kyu!!!!!!
no scratch that!!!!!!! any soul/life form/spirit/ghosts etc who doesnt stalk him has A PROBLEM!!! XD

lol meaning that whenever yesung would come to the park he'd just slowly enter his own world with just him and the scenary of the park around him, and not the other people. his sanctaury.

...he was always in his own little world, oblivious to the people around him.

your welcome! hope you dont mind the long comment! ♥

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shinelikethesky October 22 2008, 07:16:08 UTC
"...Began playing spontaneously a beautiful piece of music that, within its melody and flow, told a wordless story of a man with hair that gleamed like silvery gold and eyes you could drown in."

I loved(!) the imagery here (and in the rest of the story).

^^ Hm, you meet or see many interesting individuals at the most unexpected places...

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reissaidan October 23 2008, 07:35:18 UTC
^^ Thank you so much! <3 ♥

Yes, one really does meet interesting people at unexpected places. Though I've yet to do so... xD

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korichan October 30 2008, 05:42:13 UTC
Damn my computer hating me~ I am so behind. I really liked this though, it was really cute. ^-^

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reissaidan November 1 2008, 10:14:02 UTC
Oh hey! :D Thanks for taking the time to comment even though your computer was being bitchy. xD

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korichan November 2 2008, 03:58:34 UTC
Haha, it takes me longer but I'll still come and find your stories~

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reissaidan November 2 2008, 10:02:53 UTC
OMG, now you're somehow making me feel guilty for getting a comment from you O.O

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