see i told u i'll comment lol. well i like the use of parralelism and apostrophe throughout the poem...one of ur really good ones as opposed to just good ones lol. however i subract pts because u used a word that i dont know the meaning to (palpable), which made me feel stupid lol
lol muchas gracias and for the record palpable means able to be touched although the ironic thing about it is that i've usually only heard it used with things that couldnt actually be physically touched lol
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