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Oct 29, 2012 19:22

Now comes the time of ice and frost
Of wind and violence.
Of slow death and muted decay.

The time of scarves and gloves
And visual voices puffing and breaking through the ice.

Frigid lips and limbs
And ringing bells calling
Among commuters.

Ignored, acknowledged, and sometimes answered.

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I feel as though if I had you here
I would have no idea ( Read more... )

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dondraper1990 October 30 2012, 12:28:17 UTC
I sense a ballet of... of intricate seasonal depth. I sense a comfort beneath those sheets, the comfort of a place familiar and reliable - an agoraphobic retreat. I sense a content discontent of the streets arround you. Til the sheets can be peeled, a gift to yourself in this time of frustrating illness has purity. Small or large, no matter. Just something that compliments the spirit.

Hope you feel well soon.
Yours in words,
Frank.

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reluctantdagny October 30 2012, 12:54:16 UTC
I am sick and miserable. Illnesses always make my head hurt more then usual, like my brain resents its location. The only purity here is the feeling of wanting too bash my head in with a brick.

How are you?

I think the idea of beauty in suffering is a horrible lie.

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dondraper1990 October 30 2012, 15:24:30 UTC
My own illness rests with that of psychological pain. A cerebral torture. Dysthymia... The times of wanting to wield and send a .45 through the temple or have a Johnnie Walker cocktail with the medication prescribed... It would sum up very concisely myself in the last couple of months.

I heartily apologise for your position currently and apologise for any insolence. I sincerely do extend my mind and spiriual shoulder to you as you have for me.

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reluctantdagny October 30 2012, 15:41:53 UTC
Don't do any of those.

We'll cuddle instead.

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dondraper1990 October 30 2012, 15:50:31 UTC
I shall cherish that offer very much. The transmission of the energy from your arms into mine... We can watch Woody Allen films.

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reluctantdagny October 30 2012, 16:40:27 UTC
Also dreamy and a Chicago boy! Have you seen Grosse Point Blank? Excellent movie.

What else do you like? You must keep me sane at work.

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dondraper1990 October 30 2012, 20:03:24 UTC
A friend told me that Grosse Point Blank has one of the top 50 film scripts ever. Love Jeremy Piven in it.

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dondraper1990 October 30 2012, 20:12:42 UTC
Also, German New Wave is great. Love Rainer Werner Fassbinder and Wim Wenders. Drugstore Cowboy by Gus Van Sant also rocks pretty hard.

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reluctantdagny October 30 2012, 22:32:11 UTC
Wings of Desire is a GREAT movie. Have you ever been to the states?

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