Comments | relvoxballroom: fic: if you can't convince them, confuse them (3/?)

relvoxballroom

fic: if you can't convince them, confuse them (3/?)

Jun 18, 2011 15:38

Pairing: Rachel / Quinn, side Brittany / Santana
Rating: PG13 now, NC-17 eventually
Spoilers: All episodes, just to be safe.
Summary: Quinn gets way more than she expected when she flirts with Rachel as a joke.
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine, obviously.
Author's Note: Just pretend that Brittany dumped Artie for Santana shortly after ( Read more... )

santana/brittany, rating: nc-17, rating: pg 13, rachel/quinn

Comments 15

love thiis!! gaysharks4realz June 19 2011, 05:19:54 UTC

ok so dont abandon (dont know if the right spell, dont care :P ) us right when quinn is about to see berry in swimsuit!! plz!! :DD
loveeeed the dads xD and ur santana is perfect !! everyone is actually ... right... :)

jacs1010 June 19 2011, 06:13:53 UTC

Brilliant!

You had me chuckling throughout this whole chapter :)

Loving the Pezberry bromance, actually loving all the characters & their banter!

Next chapter please :)

mjacton June 19 2011, 18:44:54 UTC

Teasing looks good on Rachel. :)

This was plain fun. And, I'm very much looking forward to the pool party. I'm guessing things will be ratcheted up quite a bit.

ayden07 June 20 2011, 01:00:42 UTC

okay, Quinn doesnt stand a chance against Santana and Rachel's plans!! not gonna happen...they are so going to break her down and it is going to be SO GOOD!!!! Love this!!

fall_into_life June 21 2011, 00:12:47 UTC

Argh, again, this is all so rushed. I want to see the Unholy Trinity take Rachel in courtesy of Santana. I want to see something like Santana being all, "yeah, well, she's here now, so deal with it, bitch" or something like Brittany being affectionate with Rachel in front of Quinn, and Quinn coming slowly to accept that Rachel's not going anywhere ( ... )

relvoxballroom June 21 2011, 00:51:40 UTC

Okay, and now I'm starting to see why you get people that are frustrated with your commentary ( ... )

fall_into_life June 21 2011, 09:55:33 UTC

I just went back and read my comments, and I believe the term for what I come off as is regarded as impolite.

I like this piece. That doesn't seem to have come through before, so I'll say that straight out. I like what you're doing, else I wouldn't be reading it. I'm not a troll; I don't consume just to spit things out.

Keep writing for you and not for me. That's the whole point of writing like this. I just like to offer my view, and it seems to have come out more didactic than I would like.