Neighborhood Steele - Part One

[remington_laura]

She lifted her arms, stretching up far over her head, growing miraculously taller as her rib cage lifted. One hand swept downwards. A swift, fluid motion brought it back up, accompanied this time by a foot. She paused, leg held straight in a pose that looked equally painful and graceful, defying the confines of physical ability. She released the

Comments

[laura_holt_pi]

You understand them so perfectly! Nice start.

[stephsthestar]

Great start! I could really see it happening like this... can't wait to see where you go from here. I REALLY hope you'll have time to write more often, yours is some of my favorite fic!

[remington_laura]

Thanks!

[emily_rsf]

I'm glad you're continuing your story. You have such a great feel for the characters, which this part clearly shows.