I actually just re-read your previous chapters as well and I didn't find it disjointed at all. I think you balance the different families and the flashbacks and their current stories really really well.
This was a wonderful update and I think Darren and Brandi's relationship is very believable. As I believe you commented once on Kent and Bianca love comes in all shades :D
As I believe you commented once on Kent and Bianca love comes in all shades :D Yep, and I was thinking about this actually. :D It's not always just black&white, and I love to add (and read about) a bit more than just perfect wife/husband relationships in stories.
Glad you are enjoying this. :) Thanks for reading and commenting.
I'm really glad you decided to resume this story, it's really good! I love your interpretation of the maxis characters and the relationships you have them in. Brandi seems like the type that would be in such a relationship, and I think you've captured this perfectly. And I agree with Katee, the story isn't confusing at all. In fact, one of my favorite parts of your writing is the flashbacks and where they are placed in the story. The outfit changes definitely are enough of a cue, at least for me.
awww Thank you so much! Your comments mean a lot to me. <3
I've been working on this story for a ridiculous amount of time (even before posted here), mostly sporadically, though, but it's always in the back of mi head so I keep on it, even if it very slowly. I'm very happy you liked it so far.
Oh, this was great, Ale :D And not at all disjointed ;)
I've said it before, and since it's Monday (and all a bit blah) I'll just say it again: I love your interpretation of these sims and their relationships :)
Thank you so much! <3 It's been so long since I last updated, I had to read the whole thing again just to continue it. rofl I'd also lost some of the decor and one of the outfits, so I was very worried about continuity, but it's great to know it worked well all together.
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This was a wonderful update and I think Darren and Brandi's relationship is very believable. As I believe you commented once on Kent and Bianca love comes in all shades :D
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Yep, and I was thinking about this actually. :D
It's not always just black&white, and I love to add (and read about) a bit more than just perfect wife/husband relationships in stories.
Glad you are enjoying this. :)
Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I love your interpretation of the maxis characters and the relationships you have them in. Brandi seems like the type that would be in such a relationship, and I think you've captured this perfectly. And I agree with Katee, the story isn't confusing at all. In fact, one of my favorite parts of your writing is the flashbacks and where they are placed in the story. The outfit changes definitely are enough of a cue, at least for me.
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I've been working on this story for a ridiculous amount of time (even before posted here), mostly sporadically, though, but it's always in the back of mi head so I keep on it, even if it very slowly. I'm very happy you liked it so far.
Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
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I've said it before, and since it's Monday (and all a bit blah) I'll just say it again: I love your interpretation of these sims and their relationships :)
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It's been so long since I last updated, I had to read the whole thing again just to continue it. rofl I'd also lost some of the decor and one of the outfits, so I was very worried about continuity, but it's great to know it worked well all together.
Thanks for reading and commenting :)
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