Comments | remixredux08: Some Nights (The Chennai Curry Mix) [Heroes; Mohinder]

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Some Nights (The Chennai Curry Mix) [Heroes; Mohinder]

Apr 16, 2008 14:45

Title: Some Nights (The Chennai Curry Mix)
Author: emmademarais
Summary: Sometimes Mohinder gets homesick for Chennai
Rating: PG13
Fandom: Heroes
Warnings: None
Spoilers: Season 1
Title, Author and URL of original story: Some Days by puckkit
Beta: Thank you to iolsai

( Some Nights )

character: mohinder suresh, rating: pg-13, remix author: emmademarais, original author: puckkit, fandom: heroes

Comments 3

celli April 20 2008, 00:19:26 UTC

Ooh! I like the scent-memory, and the way the map takes on a life of its own in the dream.

soundingsea April 26 2008, 03:08:21 UTC

This is deliciously vivid. Well done!

puckkit April 26 2008, 22:21:26 UTC

Man. This is beautiful, and I don't know what to say. Except thank you so very, very much.

There's so many parts I could pick out. Just the way you expanded upon tiny feelings and images is such an addition. The paragraph about the map is delicious. I'm very fond of the last two sections as well, simply because they fit so well.

So thank you! You've done a marvellous job and made a fantastic story! I hope you love yours as much as I love yours :)