title: Attack of the Five Foot Ten Woman (The Slip Your Skin Remix)
author: victoria p. [
musesfool]
summary: "You think that Sally's a mandroid." "I don't think it, I know it."
fandom: Sports Night/Supernatural
characters: Jeremy Goodwin, Dean Winchester, Sam Winchester, ensemble
rating: PG
original story:
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I love the structure of the Jeremy-letter, with all his little comments, and Dan still being the craziest guy in the room, and oh! oh! this bit:
I'm not sure what Dana was more embarrassed by--asking Dan and Casey to make out in front of everyone, or challenging Sally to a duel.
"A duel?" Sam asked. "Seriously?"
"Put 'em in bikinis and a vat of hot oil and I'd pay a dollar to watch it."
"Dean."
"Man's got a point," Dan said.
So perfect. I <3 this a million.
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Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it and thought it sounded like them all.
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At this point I had to put down my breakfast because I was laughing too hard to eat!
This is utterly delightful. The Jeremy-voice is perfect, and I'm really impressed by how smoothly it flows from his narration to (the spot-on Sorkin) dialogue and back. So much fun!
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Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it, and thought it sounded like Jeremy, and that the dialogue sounded Sorkinesque.
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"I don't think it, I know it." He paused, cocked his head as if he were thinking. "Okay, maybe I don't know it, in the sense that I have any sort of proof that she is, or that such a thing as a mandroid even exists, but if they did, I believe Sally would be one. Their leader, perhaps. Their queen."
Hee! Oh, Danny. And Jeremy's voice is also excellent--I can hear it in my head as I'm reading, just like on the show.
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*snugs*
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