Stitches and Scars (The Sewn Up Tight Remix) (Supernatural, Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester, PG)

[axl_rose_tyler]

Title: Stitches and Scars (The Sewn Up Tight Remix)
Author: luzdeestrellas
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Rating: PG
Summary: "It's gonna scar," Dean says.

Sam says, "Yeah," like Dean's just said the sky is blue, or he really likes his car.

Original story: Lines of Glory by shay_renoylds

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Comments

[soundingsea]

Awesome character voices! I really enjoyed this.

[laurificus]

Thank you so much! I'm really happy you did.

[laurificus]

Woo! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for writing the kind of story I utterly adore, and for letting me play with it.

Also, I posted the story here: http://luzdeestrellas.livejournal.com/127673.html?#cutid1.

Thanks again!

[squirrelarmy]

This story was really fantastic. It was slower than what I usually read, and those types tend to be a little harder for me to buy as a general rule, but this just kept building on itself it an AWESOME way. I loved the characterization here, cos it totally made this all work. Sam's especially, because it mixes Sam's emotive side (which I think fanfic kind of over-does, most of the time) and his smartass side (which tends to be ignored in favor of Very Sweet Brotherly Moments), and I found it perfect. It just echoed over and over with brotherly love, and it was seriously amazing. And funny. :)

On top of the banter, I really enjoyed your writing. It kept the same slowly building up pace, and it just felt very Dean while keeping the narrator as a separate entity. Seriously, it was great. My favorite part of the entire story was probably where Sam forces Dean to listen about Stanford, and the line about free verse poetry? One of my favorites. It was awesome, and fantastic annoyed!Sam. Great story!

[laurificus]

Aw, thank you so much! Really, it's awesome feedback, and I appreciate it enormously. And I'm thrilled Sam worked for you here, because smartass!Sam makes me incredibly happy.

[si_star_x]

This was really great. I loved the brotherly banter and, just for the record, chicks do dig scars. Too much to be healthy, in my case.