Comments | remixredux08: Non Sequitur (The Keep the Car Running Remix) (Supernatural, PG, Dean Winchester/Sam Winchester)

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Non Sequitur (The Keep the Car Running Remix) (Supernatural, PG, Dean Winchester/Sam Winchester)

Apr 19, 2008 19:23

Title: Non Sequitur (The Keep the Car Running Remix)
Author: luzdeestrellas
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG
Paring: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Summary: It's him and Sam, taking a shot at the impossible.

Original story: Non Sequitur by silverpenlight

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( Non Sequitur (The Keep the Car Running Remix) )

remix author: luzdeestrellas, original author: hallia, character: dean winchester, fandom: supernatural, character: sam winchester, pairing: sam winchester/dean winchester, rating: pg

Comments 18

dswdiane April 19 2008, 20:44:09 UTC

Excellent story. I really enjoyed reading the first version and then the remix. Very rich and finely wrought both of them. Even though I've never seen this show, I so get the sense of the relationships from the stories I've read. Very nicely done.

Um, I think you meant backwards where you typed "he's flying bakwards."

laurificus April 27 2008, 18:19:39 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

And thanks for pointing out the typo. This is what happens when I change things after the beta. *g*

azephirin April 19 2008, 21:47:21 UTC

OMG YAY. This is a really nice angle on the original, and you did a nice job of mixing in S3 canon. The boys' voices are note-perfect, too. I really enjoyed this!

laurificus April 27 2008, 18:20:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy it worked for you.

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laurificus April 27 2008, 18:22:29 UTC

Aw, thank you! I am a Dean girl, too, but I am falling more in love with Sam by the second day. I'm really glad that scene worked for you especially, because I love the idea of Sam going all out to save Dean.

girlguidejones April 20 2008, 23:49:31 UTC

Wonderfully written!

laurificus April 27 2008, 18:18:26 UTC

Thanks so much!

silverpenlight April 21 2008, 00:16:13 UTC

Oh, wow, dude. First of all, congratulations! This was so not at all the story I had thought would be remixed, but you did an amazing job. It's an angle that I really never considered for the original story, both with the Wincest and the saving, but you took it and made it work really well. The writing is excellent, the characters are spot on, and overall: wow. I am so impressed.

Thanks so much!

laurificus April 27 2008, 18:17:50 UTC

I am so glad you liked it. I love your original so much; it blew me away the first time I read it, and I knew it had to be the one I would remix. But I am a wuss, and I couldn't make it not end happily. *g*

Thank you so much for the feedback!