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That Won't Come Out (the all that's yet inside of it remix), [Harry Potter; Severus/Minerva]

Apr 19, 2008 04:57

Title: That Won't Come Out (the all that's yet inside of it remix)
Author: bloodrebel333
Summary: Two people, two wars.
Rating: R
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Warnings: sex, but it's not very explicit.
Spoilers: up to DH, excluding the Epilogue.
Original Story: Things We Lost (And Found) In The War, by xylodemon.

That Won't Come Out (the all that's yet inside of it remix)

( We all lost things in the war. )

original author: xylodemon, fandom: harry potter, rating: r, pairing: minerva mcgonagall/severus snap, author: bloodrebel333, character: minerva mcgonagall, character: severus snape, remix author: dmx_men

Comments 2

secretsolitaire April 21 2008, 12:59:58 UTC

Wonderful writing -- sharp and understated. I liked that second to last section about Minerva's sister. Great details.

vespertanmer April 21 2008, 23:17:53 UTC

Wow. This is incredibly stark, like seeing bones through thin skin. Very nice turns of phrases, too: "self-contained tender skin" and "pens for bones". Lovely, in a very spare and unforgiving way.