Double Vision (The Fight or Flight Remix) (Stargate Atlantis; John Sheppard)

[steelydanrydell]

Title: Double Vision (The Fight or Flight Remix)
Author: nestraSummary: Rodney made him go to Colonel Carter with the story, and John, who was gradually getting more used to the idea that he trusted these people, finally agreed

Comments

[elementalv]

Dear god this was fantastic! You took this story to exactly the next step with just the right questions to ask. I can't begin to describe how happy this makes me, because really -- god!

[used to be able to express self in coherent sentences, but remixredux09 has broken brain]

[nestra]

Thanks! I'm glad you like what I did with the story -- I thought your original brought up all sorts of intriguing questions, and it was fun to play with those.

[beatrice_otter]

You did a good job of jumping into the middle of a complex situation and making it understandable to someone who had never read the original without retelling the original while at the same time doing a realistic and thoughtful look at what different timelines really mean to someone who can look at each choice and remake it. That's a lot to pack into 1500 words or so, and you did it very well. Great job!

[nestra]

Thanks! It was definitely one of my goals to make the story stand alone as well as a remix, so it's great to hear that it worked for you.

[kassrachel]

This is really awesome.

[nestra]

Thanks!

[nestra]

Thank you!

[allmuzedup]

that really is a fantastic twist. *smiles* thanks.

[nestra]

Thanks! Glad you liked it.