[FIC] by the world forgot

Dec 23, 2011 06:30

TITLE by the world forgot
FANDOM block b
PAIRING b-bomb/u-kwon
SUMMARY there are some people minhyuk would like to forget; yukwon is not one of them
WORDS 5514
RATING pg-13

work begins on monday. minhyuk hates mondays )

p: bbomb/ukwon, f: block b, l: long

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mammothcock December 24 2011, 02:13:06 UTC
WEEPS ALL OVER YOUR SHOULDER THIS IS FANTASTIC. how in the world does this resemble waste material??

the memories were so painful, augh. poor minhyuk yearning to touch yukwon, and then getting SO MANY second chances, although i'm a little confused -- did minhyuk go back in time in the last scene? this is what happens when rl gets too busy and you engage the help of someone else oh nooo.

if i'm not wrong, jaehyo gets a second chance with kyung too? you've done GREAT, and thanks for waiting for me. ♥

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remplissant December 24 2011, 02:48:22 UTC
This resembles material that should be flushed down the toilet, Elyse. Thank you, though; I'm sorry I couldn't have written you something much better ( ... )

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remplissant December 24 2011, 09:02:01 UTC
Thank you so much, even now. I didn't think I had any energy or will left to finish this story, and you came along and changed everything. I was happy to have someone there to talk it out with; you were a major help. At this point I would give my right arm for you (since I'm right-handed this should obviously mean a lot!)

The movie I've only seen once, years ago, and I loved the premise. I'm glad you think I made it my own, though; this is a huge compliment. Thank you for bouncing ideas at me, creating the snide Jiho in my head for his dialogue, and helping me adjust my timeline.

You are the very heart of this fic. It may have only turned out awesome-although this is not the word I would use to describe it-because you're so awesome. :3 ♥

/long-winded.

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remplissant December 27 2011, 21:52:26 UTC
My arm isn't good enough anyway ♥ You are far too amazing to exist.

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ubomb December 24 2011, 08:41:24 UTC
ohmygodohmygodohmygod
brb reading ;A;

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remplissant December 24 2011, 08:55:08 UTC
Calm down and breathe, haha. There is no rush :)

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ubomb December 24 2011, 09:11:20 UTC
dear lord, i think i'm in love with you. like, really. eternal sunshine of the spotless mind is one of my favorite movies. and you. omg ;A; this made me so happy yet sad at the same time. so many feels ((((゜д゜;))))
it was painful to imagine minhyuk go through his memories and regret ever wanting to erase yukwon. god, i love the way your words make everything so realist orz i felt exactly as helpless as i felt when i watched the movie! but reading this was 249023 times better.
i loved it ;A; i loved every single word of it. i'm so incoherent rn it's 3:30 a.m. but god, i really do love it. thank you for writing it.

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remplissant December 26 2011, 05:36:09 UTC
Aw, I'm so happy that I've made you fall in love with me through writing this fic :) ♥ I have only seen the film once, many years ago, but the idea has remained with me till now.

I am incredibly pleased that you liked this fic, though, and that it made you feel so many different emotions! I worked for days writing this, plotting the timeline, arranging the fic, and stressing, haha. It makes me happy and proud to know that it felt real to you.

You're such a flatterer; this is nowhere near as amazing as that film, but the fact that you enjoyed it means so much to me. ♥ Thank you for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment, even if it was late/early for you :')

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lettherebeminho December 24 2011, 14:45:17 UTC
really good.
floating through his memories was so tense and moving and for the longest time, i thought they would completely go their separate ways
...but i like the way this ended, in a way that doesn't make it clear if minhyuk will mess up again or not.
haha yeah
i consider that a good thing. open endings are the best.
:)

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remplissant December 26 2011, 05:42:10 UTC
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, firstly. Secondly, I want to say that I agree on your point about open endings-they truly are the best.

Again, thank you. :)

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remplissant December 26 2011, 06:03:11 UTC
The fact that this reminded you of a film roll or storyboard has put a huge smile on my face (I'm sure it won't leave anytime soon, either). It took a few days of writing, rewriting, arranging, and outlining; I'm happy to know that it left an emotional impact on you :)

Oh, my. ♥ The erosion of his memories and using language to detail it was such a struggle. The piece you pulled from the others has to have been my favorite :)

I will try my best to finish my commentary soon. I have so much I have left to say, and I hope you'll still want to hear it when I finally have the chance to say it :) You're welcome for the story; I was happy to write and finish it.

Thank you for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment! ♥

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