[fic] the silent words

Apr 23, 2012 15:21

TITLE the silent words
FANDOM block b
PAIRING jaehyo/kyung
SUMMARY language can do only so much, so kyung holds jaehyo's hand
WORDS 611
RATING g

the sky is full of colors )

l: short, p: jaehyo/kyung, f: block b

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applepuffs April 23 2012, 22:04:22 UTC
Omg!! That was super cute-!!
Made my heart flutter hahaha

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remplissant April 23 2012, 22:08:03 UTC
Thank you so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it :)!

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remplissant April 24 2012, 04:15:54 UTC
I enjoy writing silent fics more than loud ones lately; I just feel that there's more to convey in actions rather than words, and I have a lot of feelings for this 'ship - it was (is?) my otp, after all. Plus, I really enjoy hand-holding; it's the most adorable act of intimacy.

♥ Thank you; you always leave such sweet comments.

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remplissant April 25 2012, 20:28:17 UTC
I am just a very closed-off, distant person, tbh. I always have been. I think, though, more so now than ever I'm keeping to my space. It shows in my writing.

♥ Not at all. Your words give me strength, and I deserve nothing more than what you already give me (if I even deserve that).

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anonymous April 24 2012, 00:24:18 UTC
beautiful ♥

this is a very under-represented block b pairing, but i'm glad you wrote this n___n

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remplissant April 24 2012, 04:14:06 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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youniqorn April 24 2012, 05:22:42 UTC
They look like they'd fit, and they might even slide and lock into place until one would have trouble telling where the start-end points of either would be.

I think you already know how much I love this, how much I love jaekyung and how much I love you. And if you don't, I'll just have to keep telling you ♥ Forever~ This is still as lovely as ever, and jaekyung is otp ♥

I am here to hold your hand ♥

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remplissant April 25 2012, 04:41:45 UTC
I never will grow tired of your love for me, this 'ship, and the little things we talk about daily in our own little world. ♥ I already know of your love; I hope it's real because I believe it to be, very much so! :) But please do keep telling me all this :)

For always and forever. /holds your hand. ♥ Thank you; I love you; never leave me.

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walkonpluto April 24 2012, 11:41:46 UTC
i just love this. love how it's mellow and soft, little words here and there, that make the story.

Jaehyo's head is turned to the side, and the lights of the freeway light his face eerily - yellowed and bright. Kyung cannot tear his eyes away from the exposed strip of flesh below Jaehyo's jaw; the skin looks as though it's stretched over the muscles of his neck to the point of ripping, almost translucent with the blue trek of veins following the lines of his body. Kyung wonders if the pulse bounces harder there - if he pressed his fingers to that particular spot, could he catch the drive of Jaehyo's heartbeat beneath the meshwork of flesh and veins and muslce.

aack how lovely♥

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remplissant April 25 2012, 04:44:56 UTC
I'm not someone who writes dialogue-driven fics (it's a weakness, negl), so I'm really glad you enjoyed my little subtle romance I tried to convey. ♥ And, aah, I like that part a lot, too :')

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! :)

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