[fic] brighter days ahead

[remplissant]

TITLE brighter days ahead
FANDOM block b
PAIRING ot7, kyung/u-kwon/zico
SUMMARY "one day we'll leave this place," says jiho. the establisment isn't unkind, but there's no getting better here for people like them. yukwon hopes for freedom.
WORDS 4812
RATING pg
FOR bakalildevil @ blockbtime 2013 spring exchange

Comments

[mangafanxd]

oooooo sorry to hear about the deleting the original fic lol i would've just been like /)________(\ and given up cries

but yes this premise is so cool~~ and the narrative style, i feel, is really wonderful, as well as the characterization and the descriptions (not just of things and settings, but of feelings as well).

the disney references killed me, and there were some points in the fic where i wanted to cry lol sobs but idk where they are anymore i just know that this thing was just entirely really good and i should stop now

in short, VERY GOOD I LIKED IT /claps for you and this fic/ :D

[remplissant]

It is alright! In the end, I do like this fic too :) Never give up! If there's anything I've learned when it comes to writing and all, it's to work through the bad times :) It sucks, but you might make something great :D!

Thank you so much! When I first saw the prompt, I had this idea but thought it would be beyond me so I went with a safer route. The "safer route" ended up being the accidentally discarded piece, so I guess someone was trying to tell me to get this fic out, lol! But I am so glad all of it worked for you? because this piece was handled more carefully than some of my other recent fics, and I tried my best to not cop out on anything or anyone.

I love Disney, and I feel like the usage of it and fairy tales may have emphasized that the Lost Boys were children when they were taken in. So there's still some wonder in them, and I guess I just really added that piece of me into the fic too because I love Disney and happy endings and all that associated with them! C: I'm happy to have given you feels, though; job well done

[andersenmom]

I loved this the first time I read it. You did an amazing job!

[remplissant]

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you took the time to read it and comment ;u; ♥

[renichifreak]

oh bb, this is epic.../sparkly eyes

I would absolutely love to know your interpretation on the others and even zikyungkwon after they leave

[remplissant]

Thank you so much! ;u; ♥ I'm glad you liked it

[renichifreak]

hmmmm....well one thing is I think once they were out, they went straight to the media, though probably anonymously. I have a feeling that Jiho may have taken some proof with him because while he wanted to help their friends, he didn't want to put neither Kyung nor Kwon in the position to be hurt, especially Kyung, who's already weak.

The good doctor was probably completely open and willing to help, especially to help the others live a normal life.

Jiho is indeed the breadwinner, but I think that Kyung does something similar to IT tech or something where he can work from home, but the others always try to bring him out to like, a nearby park to get some sun and air and Kwon works seasonally because winter is just too hard on his body

wow...this is kinda fun~ lolol

and I like talking, too~ I live on aim and love making friends through comments, so no worries about walls of text...XDDD

[remplissant]

Ooh that is a nice angle! I feel like, maybe, if they did seek out the media they'd want to make sure they had everything. So maybe once it was shut down, the remaining boys (and maybe, if they can locate Hanhae) would try to make it known what happened. But, yes, I can totally see that - and the part about Jiho I really agree with

[scarredknees]

i enjoyed reading this a lot ♥ it's such an interesting au, and i love the vagueness of the situation and how well you wrote it out. my favorite character in this would have to be jiho, i love how you wrote him, as well as jaeil. thank you for writing this it was a wonderful read!

[remplissant]

I'm so happy you did (and I loved your recent fic, too ♥ cutest P.O/Sulli)! I'm glad that you didn't think of it too vague; I was worried about that happening. I like that you picked Jiho as your favorite, as he was a lot of fun to think and write about; Jaeil have a great friendship, and I unfortunately don't write about that too much.

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment ♥ c':

[windfoam]

you know i already love this. good job, dana.

[remplissant]

get out of here, dude.