[FIC] neverland lost

[remplissant]

TITLE neverland lost
FANDOM block b
PAIRING b-bomb/u-kwon
SUMMARY minhyuk has been waiting for his answer
WORDS 2225
RATING pg

Comments

[mammothcock]

omg WHAT IS THIS. i love it. is this the bittersweet fic you mentioned on twitter?

they seem to have a history? will you be writing this! also, i love the melancholic atmosphere you've created; it's all sorts of lovely. and bittersweet. aha. YES IT IS COLD, AND I'M LOVING IT. also, it snowed yesterday in yongpyong. it was really pretty and reminded me of you. ♥

[remplissant]

This is the fic I mentioned on Twitter. This is your gift. I made a new journal just for you-for the Block B fic I will write for you :) Minus the ZiKyung, of course; it will go to the regular journal.

There is a history! Thank you. Oh, atmosphere is one of my weakest points, so I'd like to use this journal to challenge myself in different ways of writing. ♥

Keep warm, love. It's snowing here, too. All I can think of is you.

[mammothcock]

take all my love. ALL OF IT. this is flawlessly written; the atmosphere is excellent! the slow progression to their admittance of feelings makes me want to weep tears of adoration all over you. NEVER LEAVE ME ODG. additionally, i love how the fic ends. in the beginning minhyuk and yukwon appear extremely distant, but the closing line brings them together and that is positively DELIGHTFUL.

seven years though. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU, YUKWON??

it's not snowing in seoul, unfortunately, it's just been absurdly cold. perhaps our love can will snow into existence. ♥

[remplissant]

Why I can't take all of your love; what would be left for Block B? But I will still gladly accept all you'll give me ♥ I think a steady build-up in a relationship is one of the best, but I cannot do it like you.

Why would I leave you? How could I leave you? You're too amazing and wonderful. ♥

I am playing with themes, so I'm glad you liked the distance at the beginning being completely eliminated in the ending :) I told you I would write happy fic for you, even though this is the best I can give you for now.

Yukwon is a bit slow on the uptake. He has ~feelings~ he needs to sort out.

I wish I could be there to warm you up, love ♥

[ladyasriel]

I've read death fics that weren't this sad, jfc. nice work, though.
the way you put scenes from the past in the story is amazing.

[remplissant]

The past moments interfering and stopping the actual storyline was a bit I was experimenting with-it was much smoother in my head, but the same headthoughts cannot quite be tamed it seems, haha. Thank you so much; I'm sorry to have made you sad :)

Also, the mv your icon is made of is beautiful as well ♥ I am a huge fan of Phantom's work, and that is my most played song lately.

[ladyasriel]

if it was an experiment, keep doing it! obviously worked hehe.

and yes, I'm addicted to Phantom too. I don't have words to say how much I love this song, Hole in your face :c

[remplissant]

Haha, thank you for the words of encouragement :)!

Phantom is so good; Hole In Your Face is such an amazingly gorgeous song!

[remplissant]

No, not at all! I understand perfectly where you're coming from! We all have our quirks and preferences, so I'm glad that despite your usual standards you did like this! Thank you; I really like writing! :)

[remplissant]

Aw, I'm sorry for any loss of tears. Seven is quite a long while to wait, especially for one person to make up their mind.

Atmosphere and imagery were the areas I was most concerned in building, and I'm glad you experienced the "yesterday" feelings. :) Haha, yes (in terms of events) not much does happen, but I am pleased to know you liked this despite that!

You're very welcome; thank you for reading! :)

[ubomb]

i loved it. your imagery is amazing, and also the way you describe their expressions and emotions is amazing. i love the way the story deepens with the flasbacks in between. it's just- whoa. ♥

[remplissant]

Oh, my! :) this comment is just lovely! Thank you so much-this fic was a challenge to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you again! :) ♥

[acornmama]

beautiful

[remplissant]

Thank you! :)