[FIC] hiding monsters in closets

[remplissant]

TITLE hiding monsters in closets
FANDOM block b
PAIRING kyung, kyung/zico
SUMMARY park kyung is nonexistent
WORDS 1532
RATING r

Comments

[mammothcock]

this is. this is amazing, actually. spectacular. i'm not devastated, i'm blown away. raw's definitely the word for this -- kyung's emotions are shockingly clear, and even then you manage to give a subtlety to them through his actions. i think the second person pov helped a lot as well, which you pulled off excellently. i didn't realise this until i was halfway through this piece tbh ahaha.

your ragethoughts are brilliant. i love you like a love song. ♥

[remplissant]

Thank you; you know your opinion matters most to me. I was afraid I might make you sad, since I'm prone to do that with my fics :( but I'm glad you weren't. I have a lot of rambling thoughts about Kyung, not all so sweet and/or happy, but all very real.

I am very, very happy to know you think it came through clear and hit you hard even if it might be subtle? ♥ Second person was another challenge I imposed myself with, so your compliments swell my heart. ♥

My ragethoughts, sighs. If only I could turn all my ragethoughts and/or ~feelings~ into fic like this. I am very pleased with its outcome, and you know it's all for you.

♥ a love song on constant replay :)!

[mammothcock]

as yours does to me too! this was sad, but the mindblowing aspect of it overwhelmed all potential feelings of sadness? i'm in awe by how well-written this is. i read it over again and was blown away again.

it came through clear and hit you hard even if it might be subtle
OH NO I'M BEING CONTRARY AGAIN. it's just that every action of kyung's had a meaning on the surface and seemed as though it had an underlying meaning as well. not making sense, am i?

i think i might combust if you wrote any more fic for me. my entire being is screaming NOT WORTHY NOT DESERVING but i know how you'll respond to that. THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE IS TOO LIMITED FOR MY FEELINGS FOR YOU.

[remplissant]

I have this overwhelming urge to tweet you all my Kyung-thoughts-less rage, more steady acceptance, though. Please tell me to refrain; there is no need for another thousand words of angry feelings, haha. :)

I want to improve, and I think this is my best written fic to date! I'm glad to have written it ♥ My writing always has the potential to be sad, Elyse-I vow to write you happy Block B fic. One day.

You make perfect sense to me! As much sense as I regularly make, at least.

Good, I'm happy to know that the past seven months haven't been in vain. You do deserve all this and more; I'll keep writing for you until I feel like I've written something worthy of you.

The English language allows very little flexibilty in ways of expression. I suppose a standard "I love you" will have to do, but do take note that I say this with the utmost sincerity and conviction.

[ippeun_nuna]

Omg. Stunning!

I loved it. And I always kind of feel this weird aura around Kyung. I think he really struggles... -sighs- I am glad someone sees it the same way. Though it's not much of help to him.

[remplissant]

Oh, my! Thank you! :)

I call these feelings my "ragethoughts" and I have quite a few that didn't make it into the fic, haha. Kyung is very... peculiar, in the way I think he holds back on saying certain things and voicing particular thoughts. fjsdk; Supporting him in all his future endeavors and loving the group is probably the best way to help him.

Thank you again for taking the time to read! :)

[canttakeabreath]

this was so interesting--great character voice, dana! i really loved it.

[remplissant]

Thank you so much, Els! ♥ I'm glad you did!

[krdzr]

Not a lot of people write like you.
I like the use of words and how they were played with.
And I love the fact that you used second person pov and got away with it.

Random fact: I read the entire thing as if someone was rapping it in my head.

[remplissant]

Thank you so much :)!

I was very particular in what it was I wanted to express in this fic, since these are my moreso personal thoughts regarding Block B. 2nd person pov is a tricky thing to play around with, so I'm glad you think I executed it well!

That is an interesting fact! You're great; thank you for taking the time to read and comment :)!

[thatdayismine]

oh jesus fucking christ i don't even know what to say or where to start or just, fuck. but i love dark, introspective fic like this. love it to death because no one ever wants to talk about why they might hate someone or be jealous and just, no one saves kyung either, he just has to deal with feeling like he's second best and I AM NOT EVEN MAKING SENSE AND I DON'T EVEN CARE THIS IS FUCKING FLAWLESS

[remplissant]

oh, wow this is embarrasing since I just read your fic before checking my inbox ;; now you're going to think me strange!Where to start with this beautiful comment? You make perfect sense to me! This came from lack of sleep and one hour of writing; I fondly call this my "ragethoughts fic" because these are the horrible thoughts that slip through when I think of Block B. Kyung is a favorite of mine-they are all favorites of mine, but this is Park Kyung, and I just have special feelings toward him

[thatdayismine]

omg, no, i kinda just loled when i saw you had commented on my fic right after i commented on yours. :D

omg i just, lately i have ALL THESE FEELS for kyung and i don't even know why but i do because he just, there is something so RIDICULOUSLY attractive about him and i just want to, i don't even know. ;______

[remplissant]

Ah, I'm glad you don't think I'm strange then! :D