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Jul 12, 2009 23:29

Title: Untitled, as of yet.
Author: AidaApple
Rating: PG, at the moment
Pairing: RemusHermione.
Disclaimer: I honestly do not own Harry Potter, I just use and abuse the characters.

A/N - I've been a lurker of this community, and a reader of this pairing for a little while now, but I've only just turned my hand to writing it. It's such a shame that there ( Read more... )

Comments 9

artemis_ephesus July 13 2009, 04:14:40 UTC

Welcome to the world of writing Remus/Hermione! I haven't seen anything new since the exchange was on. My exchange, might I add, I came up with the idea for it after seeing how little was being written.

But yeah - nice! Very nice, in fact. I like the premise, the fact that Harry and Ron aren't really in it, the setting, it has a nice atmosphere. I love the chivalry line. Even though I'm not usually one for time-turner fics, I like this. It isn't at Hogwarts, which I think makes it easier for me.

As I was saying above, there was an exchange, check out the masterlist here: http://community.livejournal.com/rlhg_exchange/
You might find some stuff that you like, including a short fic by yours truly. Other than that, if you're looking for a beta drop me a line, I'm PI accredited and everything, always looking out for RLHG fics!

aidaapple July 13 2009, 09:12:53 UTC

I never expected such a quick response! Thank you. That exchange looks positively delicious, and I'm practically salivating to get to it.

Just one little problem though; I'm not exactly eighteen. And I won't be for a few... years. I may just have to log out and leave some comments as an anonymous viewer because I really do want to see them. ~cough~ I'll just skim over whatever "mature" parts there are.

I do like Time Turner fics (though I'm sure that's obvious), but the whole school thing is way overdone, tired and boring. I'm glad you find it okay, even though they don't really appeal to you.

Thanks for the offer of the beta as well. I may have to take you up on that some time. ;)

artemis_ephesus July 13 2009, 10:17:28 UTC

Hey, in my book, chronological age counts for very little. *cough* I mean, I read the Jean M Auel's Ayla books when I was 11 and they had graphic prehistoric sex scenes in them... I don't see the publishers censoring that!
So anyway, as the organiser of the thing I give you permission to read. I'm not one who can condemn.

eamane_elensar July 13 2009, 06:17:43 UTC

Time Turner fics have become such an overused cliche with this pairing, it's refreshing to find one where Hermione's not still a student traveling back to Remus' schooldays. It's also nice seeing Hermione at a job where she has to start at the bottom like the rest of us ;)

This is a really nice start! And it's a rough draft? Could have fooled me! It's written very well, and I like your attention to the small details. It seemed very real to me.

Welcome to the fandom! I look forward to reading more from you!

aidaapple July 13 2009, 09:16:54 UTC

I would find it harder to write about her interacting with them during their schooldays anyway - even if it wasn't so overdone and I wanted to do it. Even Hermione would get shoved in some crappy office conjuring tea and crap for fat men in suits who take all the credit for her work. XD

I have a bit of a problem with comma splicing and things, but thank you! I half expected to be ripped to pieces. :)

kimmehcat July 13 2009, 06:52:02 UTC

I love this! It's so rare lately to find any new Remus/Hermione fics, and this one shows so much promise. =] I really hope you continue this.

aidaapple July 13 2009, 09:18:47 UTC

I'm so unimaginative; all I can think of to say is "Thanks", again. You're all so nice.

(And you all have Remus, or HermioneRemus icons. I need to get me some.)

lapaleuk1 July 13 2009, 15:52:06 UTC

I think it's lovely. You have an interesting writing style and an interesting idea which sets up an interesting dynamic between the two characters. It's not cliché, which is more than a lot of writers can say, and I hope you keep it up!

shallyshilly July 13 2009, 18:04:29 UTC

You capture the young Remus very well, I think! Some chivalry, some mischeif, some tenderness. Very good. And I think you'll have more creative options since you're writing this when they're both out of school. I hope you have a very imaginative ending dreamed up! :D That's my favorite part of Time-Turner fics ( ... )