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FIC: Together, Alone for red_day_dawning

Mar 03, 2008 09:02

Title: Together, Alone
Recipient: red_day_dawning
Rating: NC 17
Pairing(s): Remus/Severus
Warning(s): Pretty much AU, but spoilers for HBP and DH ….
Summary: I wrote it as post DH but it sort of came off as post HBP. They are alive, of course, and find eachother after some time away. I hope I got some of the elements right! I am so bad at ( Read more... )

Comments 5

red_day_dawning March 11 2008, 07:47:09 UTC

Ooh, lovely. Thank you so much, mystery writer.

I love:
Remus wasn’t fooled. He could smell the want settling into his skin like a heavy cloak. Severus of old would have taken advantage, lured him to a dark corner or an empty room and absolutely preyed upon him and his weaknesses before handing over the green vial of sanity. He knew as he poured the bitterness down his throat that a parallel had been born. He was once the broken and the damned, forever condemned with his curse. Now in that darkness he had a kindred soul, one who would also be forever stained and irrevocably broken. As the warmth of the drug took over his body he set out after Severus, wanting to give him everything he had ever received. - That's lovely & angsty & ever-so-sweet.

And a lovely ending, just perfect!
The two started on their ways, each going a different direction when Remus stopped and in a low voice raised a question.
“Severus?” He said.
“I have a place nearby….”Very nice, indeed. Thanks for writing this - it's fabulous - Remus's drawing the heat ( ... )

candesgirl March 25 2008, 22:35:22 UTC

You are welcome : ) I really had a lot of fun writing this! It had been a long while since I did any Remus fic and it was just itching to come out I think :) I tried to do the happiest ending I could, tihnking that they two of them going off to one of their apartments would be plenty happy enough : ) Yay! I am so glad you liked it!

randomisedhabit March 12 2008, 00:55:21 UTC

Lovely. I really like the parallels you've drawn.

Good job!

candesgirl March 25 2008, 22:36:21 UTC

Thank you : ) Parallels are a lot of fun to do when Remus is involved, it seems I always use them : )

bonfoi June 20 2012, 05:09:39 UTC

Whoa! Hot and hard and fast and passionate. Turning the tables should always be so good.