Maybe you're my love?

Apr 15, 2010 13:30

WOOOO, FIRST AT A CHALLENGE FOR ONCE! (Did I get that right?)

The Bottom Line
Author: kyoy
Category: [Twisted Fantasy]; General, Drama
Prompt: VII. for a love that wouldn't bloom, for the hearts that never played in tune [fushizengirl]
Rating: G
Characters: Boss/Aera (Boss Introspective)
Disclaimer: Not mine, etcetera, etcetera.
Word Count: 555
Notes: This is ( Read more... )

twisted fantasy, tf_10differences, fushizengirl, kyoy

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slasher_forever April 15 2010, 08:45:00 UTC
AAW ANG GANDA NG ITO. So short but still so beautiful~ parang ang sad ni Boss, especially the 'And now she's getting married and he's giving her away.' BAAAWW

anyway, I actually read this because 1. nobody has read it/decided to drop a comment, 2. I'm bored and not doing my edits and 3. I was hoping I'd get ideas for the challenge but orz. nvm me trying nao.

oh kyoy. I'm surprised you're the first to post! congrats! xD hoping the people would join in soon (including me) :p

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kyoy April 19 2010, 11:23:21 UTC
AWW THANK YOU SO MUCH, JASMIN ♥ I wonder if I got my message across with that line O:

3. I was hoping I'd get ideas for the challenge but orz. nvm me trying nao.
I knew I was correct in believing that was a lie! /o/

Me too, woooo! Danke schön, Jasmin! *O* I hope more people join too ;o;

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seikochan April 15 2010, 13:27:22 UTC
It's gorgeous! I know nothing about the series, but ugh, it definitely tugged at the heartstrings. I love the portrayal of the regrets and the thoughts in the aftermath. Very lovely piece, darling. ♥

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kyoy April 21 2010, 04:46:59 UTC
B'AAAAWWWW. Despite not knowing about the fandom, you liked it aaaa. I already told you, but your comment really means a lot to me so ahuhuhu danke schön again! ♥

ps, This is a fanfic based on Andi's original story that will never reach 'the end' because she is a sadist like that ahuhuhu ;o; I'd gladly give you a copy of whatever there is so far but the story exists via oral tradition and my memory sucks so yeah.... :(

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sacla April 16 2010, 06:33:08 UTC
i squeeled like crazy!!!!!!! dokidoki (wala na, sila talaga otp rabu)

thank you hafffuuuu! Its A for osom!!!! eeeeeppppp i'll think of more constructive comment after i flail my heart out

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Uggghhhh boss thoughts are so... so...
...it didn't have a name for itself yet.
that line! Could so perfectly describe their relationship! eeeeppp

I don't know why but this

Maybe if she had showed more interest, he would've given in. Maybe if he had given in, she would've showed more interest.

just really struck me. I think it'll influence my perspective for my own fic (since you know, my heart wants nothing else lol)

but yeah fangirlying boss pov! ahihihi thanks for this!!! <3

(yay you first entry!)

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kyoy April 21 2010, 04:57:46 UTC
O-orz. Way to go to push Waifu further to the other side, Self! DX

But lol, we all have our own fandoms, ja? /o/

that line! Could so perfectly describe their relationship! eeeeppp
Ahaha I find it amusing that this is exactly the line I was talking to you about last night~

I don't know why but this just really struck me.
A kinda depressing line, but it's a line that seemed to fit them? B'aaaawwww Boss/Aera ;o; /wibbles

BUT WOW YAY I INFLUENCE YOU! /flails

Can't wait until you finish that fic you're saying. POST SOON PLOX. /needy

I'm just glad you liked it like this! ♥

(Woooo! Sayang nakuha na ni Jasmin yung 2nd entry. Wait for the fourth so it's divisible by four? /dork)

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psychedelic_aya April 21 2010, 18:38:42 UTC
I really like this. I know I already told this to you when I first read it when we were aircon-ing in Vivi-kun, but yeah. \o/ I really think you captured the theme of the challenge. You displayed the Boss in a different way and yet still kept him in-character.

He'd like to think it wasn't him-but it wasn't her either. Maybe it was both of them. Maybe if she had showed more interest, he would've given in. Maybe if he had given in, she would've showed more interest. It was a give-and-take thing but they both didn't do both quite enough. There were a lot of other 'maybes' that didn't matter anymore-here they are now, on the happiest day of her life to date which also happened to be the most confusing one of his.

BEST PARAGRAPH.

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