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Feb 15, 2009 18:53

Title: Holiday Fest 2009 - The Portrait
Author: rendrag45
Rating: PG
Mood: Happy
Tags: Zach, Shaun and Cody, Valentine's Day, Holiday Fest 2009

Shaun and Zach were sitting on the sofa in the family room, drinking a few beers and enjoying the small fire in the fireplace that took the chill out of the early January weather. They were ( Read more... )

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torry28 February 16 2009, 01:31:54 UTC

Very sweet and heartwarming so much love between the three.
I can visualize the portrait, would be awesome to see the real thing. In my mind, don't laugh yet, I see Shaun and Zach stand next to each other arms on each others waist, each holding their board with their free hand, Cody kneeling on his board his head between his two dads with an arm wrapped around one of the legs of both men. In the background the ocean glittering from the slowly descending sun casting a soft glow over the three boys. They look at each other smile, then back at the camera. Now you can lough.
Hugs
Torry

yana_ambf February 16 2009, 05:03:03 UTC

What a cute envisioning of the family portrait! Perfect! I can see it! :)

rendrag45 February 16 2009, 05:28:44 UTC

I love how you're envisioning the portrait. I'll bet everyone who reads the fic has a different portrait in mind. Isn't that awesome? Thanks for reading the fic.

brokeback1963 February 16 2009, 18:39:13 UTC

Oh PLEASE, please, would you be so nice to draw that portrait?It'd be awesome, I just know it!! The way you describe it is beautiful and sweet, just perfect, you bet.

If you had time, baby, it'd be amazing to see that drawing....

Thank you so much!!

(((hugs you tight)))

Tammy.

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yana_ambf February 16 2009, 05:01:30 UTC

What an endearing vision of the little family happy together!

rendrag45 February 16 2009, 05:27:29 UTC

Thanks for reading my fic. I hope you liked it!

yana_ambf February 16 2009, 11:00:04 UTC

I sure did like it! Waiting for your next one! :-D

rendrag45 February 16 2009, 22:23:40 UTC

I like this icon on your post (What's up. Cody?) That's so cute! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.

fizzerbass February 16 2009, 13:19:40 UTC

Wonderful! I love how excited Zach got to create something for Shaun's Mom - and how Shaun knew enough to leave him alone to do it. :)

What a sweet Valentine's gift...both for Shaun's Mom and for us! Thanks for sharing.

rendrag45 February 16 2009, 22:21:42 UTC

It's so nice to hear from you, Fizzer. Any praise from you is high praise indeed. Thanks for reading.

brokeback1963 February 16 2009, 18:40:01 UTC

Alice, why isn't my comment here? I wrote it and posted it today....Maybe you have two entries for this story? Oh...I hope so....

rendrag45 February 16 2009, 22:20:32 UTC

Dear BabyTammy-- Your comment is in this list above. Maybe somehow it got out of place, but it was real sweet and I would love to draw the picture for you the way I envision it. I just don't know how to draw something, then post it. You probably need a scanner which I don't have. Remember, I'm a techno-doofus! I can't even post on Shelter because I sometimes can't get the lj-cut to work. Hey -- where's YOUR Valentine's fic or poem? I was sure the holiday would inspire you. You write such absolutely great musings. Please share something with us.
Hope you're feeling good these days.

brokeback1963 February 16 2009, 22:26:27 UTC

Oh babe, I'm not talking about that comment. I wrote a comment for your story. I think you posted twice this story, at least I see it twice in my friend-list, and my comment is the only one in the first entry...I promise....

Oh Alice, I'm not writer like you are....I can't write a thing...But thank you so much, friend. I prefer reading all your wonderful work.

(((hugs you so tight)))

Tammy.

rendrag45 February 16 2009, 22:32:29 UTC

You're right. I found your comment at the end of the second printing of the fic. I tried to post the fic to Shelter about fifteen times on Saturday, but I couldn't get the lj-cut to work. So, I just gave up. I didn't realize it printed THREE times in my journal! Well, mystery solved!
Now, as for your writing. Don't tell me you can't write. Did you forget that you wrote two short pieces several months back? And everybody told you how great they were? How poetic, emotional, sweet, deep? And how perfect the English was? I remember that, Tammy. You're AWESOME, girl. So, don't tell us you can't write. You are muy gifted! Love ya. Alice

jess_d_10 February 20 2009, 03:57:28 UTC

This is so sweet! I love Zach's excitement as he gets creative. And his words to Shaun at the end are beautiful. Well done!