Blue On Black: Epilogue

[renegadeangelz]

LJ username: renegadeangelz 
Title: Blue On Black
Story rating: NC-17
Pairings: Jared/Jensen, Jared/OMC (non-con)
Summary: Obsessive teachers, bi-curious love interests, and the general insanity of a downtown college experience. Nobody said art school would be easy. Jared just never expected it would be this hard.
Warnings: OCs, teacher sexually harassing a student;

Comments

[deans_mine]

It's incredible how far you pulled me into this story. Jared and Jensen's lives were struck with the force of a mack truck. Everything became focused on that one horrible act done by a total monster. I felt like the J's brought down some Winchester justice on a well deserving monster

[renegadeangelz]

I've actually been worrying over this story and whether what I was trying to get across would come through or not but you're comment shows me that it did. And that makes me very, very happy.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story and thank you for taking the time to write out how the story effected you and what you took from it.

[sheldoncfan]

Just found this story and it pulled me in right from the start. I think you have a very talented writing style, and I loved how you described both Jared’s passion for drawing and Jensen’s for photography. The way you set the atmosphere throughout the story was extremely well done

[renegadeangelz]

Thank you for reading and for the well thought out comment. I'm glad you enjoyed reading the story. And don't worry I'm not offended in the least with that point of criticism. I've been an art student long enough that I've learned to keep an open mind about critiques on the things I create whether it's a painting or my writing.
I can definitely see where you're coming from on this and I agree with your perspective that it was a bit OOC for the way I'd written their characters up to that point, this is definitely more of something Dean might do. I'll be sure to keep an eye on things like that when it comes to future writings.
Thanks again for your praise and constructive criticism. :) <3

[ayane42]

holy crap!! this was so good!!

so tense!! first the relationship between Jared and Jensen and then that creep Nathan. wow!! i couldn't stop reading it.

and i really didn't think they'd kill him, wow!!

awesome awesome story!! wow!!!

[renegadeangelz]

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. Gives me drive to write more. :)

[ash48]

Congratulations! You have been recced at spn_littlebro!

[reggie11]

That was much darker than I thought it was going to be. I was kind of hoping that once they realised Nathan was a killer that they'd tip off the cops and leave. The murder left me a little shaken.

Even though the ending wasn't something I was hoping or prepared for you handled the aftermath of the sexual assault well. Many people lose themselves completely after something so devastating and people often forget that the actual victim is often not the only victim - loved ones and partners can find their world crushed under the weight as well.

Still not sure how I feel about the murder though.