Chapter XII (The Final Chapter!) Twilight Fan Fiction

Nov 05, 2009 07:38


A/N  Last chapter.  I hope you enjoy

CHAPTER XII

Damned bucket seats. Alice was no more than two feet away from him, but it was too far. And even if they weren't separated by a gap between the seats, Jasper still couldn't reach out and tuck her against him, as Carlisle had admonished her to keep her healing arm completely immobile. Instead, Jasper ( Read more... )

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miaokuancha May 4 2010, 19:37:06 UTC
Just perfect.

You can tell that I read this at one sitting. It has given me immeasurable happiness and enjoyment. Just an utter gem of a story, beautifully structured, not too long, not too short, WELL READ!! (Sartre! Yes!), exquisitely written, and deeply felt.

Yes I was crying again, too.

Deep sigh. And thank you.

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rennaise May 4 2010, 21:49:10 UTC
Glad you liked!
And you reminded me, I actually added another couple of scenes between the previous chapter and this one, as I thought this was kind of abrupt. I updated at fanfiction.net, but didn't update here because I didn't think anyone would ever read it :)
Well, maybe I'll have to edit that here on my journal now.
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
Renn

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