[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 2

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 2/?
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's betrayed

Comments

[toni_luv]

It's always the cute and innocent faces you gotta watch out for. You never know what goes behind the innocent mask once you're escorted further to your coming death. The question lies within this, was there really an alliance held off between these two countries tied to their sons? Was this send off the only time for the King and Queen to kill off Changmin, cover it up later? UUgghh gaw cliffhanger you suck!!! Changmin, it's time use what you've learned!!! You maybe out numbered you got the forest to your advantage! Use what your hyung taught you!!! It's time you stand on your two feet and fight for your life!!

[rennie_88]

hahahah~ oh i missed your comments :) always so interesting !
yes, i love the two-faced-ness of the innocent facade ~ :) we'll see what minnie can do~ he's strong but very outnumbered ^^ sorry for cliffhanger! chapter would be too long otherwise~ ;P

[dreaming_col]

Ren!!! You never told me you were gonna post a fic~~!!! *poutyface at you*

Ugh, this story leaves me with sooooo many question. Why are the men acting like that? Is it really just because he's an illegitimate son? Had Junsu EVER actually been Min's friend? And if he was, why did he suddenly turn like that? (I'm assuming you'll answer all these questions at some point or another. I'm just impatient and want to know now~~~! /whiny/)

And Minnie~!!! *squishes* Ohmygosh, the poor baby. I can only imagine how absolutely disheartened and dejected he felt through all of this. *more snuggles*

Really can't wait to see what Jae and Chun's roles will be in all of this. Definitely looking forward to your next update, dear. It's so good~~!!! ^^

(P.S. - I need a noraebang night. Like, really soon. Sometime when I get back from my visit home. Just sayin'... XD)

[rennie_88]

-0-!! u know why! cuz ur fics are just so freaking amazing and good and im all ... bleh shy/intimidated LOL T^T *post quietly in the corner* haha (and i cant see ur pouty face i can only see ur pouty min icon ~ sooo cuuutee! ) but geez. now u make me all nervous , but i still love you <3 <3 lol

[dreaming_col]

Psh, whatever~~~ It's good. No reason to be shy. ^_^ (Even if you can't see my pouty face, you know me well enough by now to imagine it. XD) Don't be nervous~!! I love you, too! ♥♥

I really, really like it!! Really. XD And I understand alllll about keeping secrets. As you maybe could have noticed... ^_~

Well, I certainly won't protest snuggling the Min-ster. And I'm sure Jae won't mind so much, either. Min, on the other hand... *slides away from Minnie's touch-me-if-you-dare-glare*

(*giggles* I'm sorry it scared you so much~~! Well, sort of sorry. That was kinda the whole point, after all... XD Haven't done any other horror. Yet. But I'll let you know if I ever come up with a good idea for another one. ^^)

(We will definitely have to arrange a full day for fangirling and then noraebang after I get back. :D I will get back on Sunday afternoon, but maybe next weekend we can arrange something? And I'm definitely having a great time, even though it IS super-hot. hit 100 today... O_O)

[rennie_88]

hahaha i'm giving u permission..no..ordering u to cuddle the min! he cant get away from it. plus we both know better than he does what's good for him.

(well i wouldn't normally go for scary at all, except ur fic makes me think if any of the boys ever starred in horror,, even GORE.. i'd see it and love it O_O ..maybe...if it involved them clinging to eachother in terror... lol!)

(not looking forward to back to work tho TT yep i think next weekend is free~ tho we gotta strategically plan for staying indoors most of the time cuz its too hot TT i think i justfeel worse cuz our house has no ac and there's no reprieve TT! lol i guess u're immune to it already :P)

[harunotenshi]

i feel so angry about this chapter.

how could they do these things to changmin? how? he hasn't done anything to them at all? why are they even doing this at all? and junsu! how could he turn his back on min just like that?

TT___________________________________________TT

min doesn't want to cry and he's been hurt too deeply already. betrayed and bullied and now being hunted like an animal. i hate the men with him. i hate junsu.

i just wish that someone would help min. my heart hurts right now because of what's happening to min. be it jae or chun, i want someone to help min.

if jae is going to be making a grand entrance in the next chapter, he better be helping min. i'd hate to have to hate him too. TT_________TT

and why are you updating next weekend? nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo~ OTL TT___________________________TT

[rennie_88]

TTT SORRIE~ i feel so guilty reading ur comments back to back, cuz after the first chapter everything was so positive and hopeful, and then ....it just got ruined with evil hatingg TT huuu even tho there's a reason for what they're doing.. ~ ;P

but dont worry , even tho for some reason i can make duckbutt evil ..i dont think i could ever make joongie or chunnie evil. T^T i hate it when they're evil in fics.. and i want them to love min.. *cough* so hopefully thats a positive thing ~ XDD

actually.. next weekend is already just tomorrow already :P

[aisukidesu]

I like this story! >o<

make me sad, but is good~ *masochist*

please update it ^0^

[rennie_88]

im happy u like it :D thank u~ <3 haha
ur not masochist more than me :S we just like angst ~ keke
its already updated ~

[yakuso5u]

Short comment it'll be cos I'm in a hurry to get to the next part (LOL I'M SO INSANELY HAPPY THAT I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT FOR IT YOU HAVE NO IDEA SO EXCITED CLIFFHANGER OMGGG!!!)

I... can't believe Junsu did that. Like, really??!! REALLY?!! O___O" I hope he has some serious motives, and if that's not the case, he'd better not appear in that story again unless it's for Min to kick him in the face *pissed*
Now seriously... it hurt, seeing Changmin that trusting then so helpless as his comrades turn his back on him... you have that feeling that in other circumstances, he could all bring them down, but he just doesn't want to believe that this could be happening and... aissshhhhhh next part I'm going!!! +___+

(and the HoMin is lhefugzfmzho ADORABLE ANGSTY!! I hope they'll reunite later!!! And can I supposed that the fic title is related to that memory of them? ^^)

(you're awesome. damn. I need to find your house and put a big shiny board on your door so that everyone will know XD <33333)

[yakuso5u]

(and I'm scared by my own vision of "short comment" >.<)

[rennie_88]

well.. for our standards it is quite short :o how did you do that????? and actually its a super good thing u waited to read just for the fact of the cliffhanger! lol (tho i wasn't planning on making cliffhangers just chapter 2-3 was originally ONE chapter and thats just too long right? XD)

oh. well, evil junsu has to dig himself a little grave before he takes his grand exit. its only like... one shovel dug so far :P *evil cackle* will there be redemption or forgiveness??? if not, i can just kill him off for real XD WOOO! *getting high on power* but lmao at min kicking him in the face, i like it *_*

um the title might not make sense until the very very end. unless you somehow use the tentacles to read my mind and figure it all out :P

(uhhhh what will the big shiny board say?? :S but can there be a spell on it so only those who believe and fan together can see it? XD lol! it can be a homing device and beacon for fangirls who are developing tentacles)

[yakuso5u]

I dunno... it's a small trauma actually ;~; I tried to control my brain but I'm afraid it caused even more damaged (see monster-comment on the 3rd chappie). Shouldn't go against natural tendency to spam XD

You have all powers girl!! I'm handing Junsu's case to your advised judgement (>>> YOU'D BETTER MAKE HIM PAY DAMNIT!!!!). No one hurts Minnie and gets away with it! :o (at least, not in our world of greasy jungles... right? XD)

Lol I'll wait then for the title!! Maybe our tentacles will connect in our sleep and it'll dawn on me... I'll tell you if that's the case and then we'll have the definite proof that there's something strange with us XD

(it says that you're the awesomest of awesome and that the whole world should crawl at your feet, so yeah, maybe it's better to keep it for people who deserve to know about it XD Tentacles-power chase? Gathering an army in charge of digging out the gems of angst? :p)