Comments | rennie_88: BYG

rennie_88

BYG - Ch 2

Aug 01, 2011 09:42

Title: Before You Go
Pairing(s): Jaemin, Yoosu (later),
Length: Chaptered 2/20?
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: (gang) violence, language, abduction
Genre: AU, drama, angst
Summary: Jaejoong and his cousin have been swept up into the world of violence and gangs. The struggle and fight for his sanity is complicated greatly by the addition of a certain Shim ( Read more... )

pairing: jaemin, rating: r, genre: drama, genre: action, rating: pg-13, genre: au, author: r, genre: angst, length: chapter

Comments 15

rikuma August 3 2011, 12:34:09 UTC

wow!!!
that was intense!!!
was junsu one of them???
love the update anyway....:)

rennie_88 August 3 2011, 12:59:03 UTC

wah~ you're fast :) kkk thanks so much for the comment <3

junsu will be explained in a few chapters :P but all they boys will be in it eventually ~

haizul August 3 2011, 16:58:30 UTC

poor changmin.. would love to know more about his thoughts on jaejoong though! xD

rennie_88 August 4 2011, 03:27:37 UTC

hmmm i'll keep that in mind!!! :) thank youuuuu kkkk

osito_89 August 3 2011, 23:33:30 UTC

new reader XD
love my jeamin fics ^^
cant wait to see where this one takes me...i hope both min and jj are ok

rennie_88 August 4 2011, 03:39:08 UTC

hehe i love jaemin tooooooooo -0-!!!!
thx for reading <3<3

daradaradara12 August 4 2011, 04:25:06 UTC

This story is super interesting!

So Junsu is a mafia? It would make sense... I'm still wondering why they threw JaeMin in that cell? What do they want with Jae? I guess it's because he's part of a rival gang. What do they want with Min? If it was only because he had witnessed the whole thing, they would have simply killed him, right?

As you can see, I have so many questions and I can't wait for you to update!

rennie_88 August 4 2011, 13:39:06 UTC

explanations coming chapter threeeeeee~four kkkkk

i love ur questions! :D cuz i can't see my plot plan objectively anymore, so it lets me know it makes sense in the right ways and also leaves the right things curious !huuu!
i just hope it's not all too cliche later :( updating soon! <3

daradaradara12 August 4 2011, 16:26:31 UTC

Sure thing! When I write, I also think that feedback is essential and I modifiy my original scenario according to my reader's comments. Sometimes I forget that others don't see my story the way I do...
Glad I could be of any help!
(Please, don't make it too cliche... T_T)

rennie_88 August 5 2011, 07:09:05 UTC

exactly!! ^^
it's tough if u have no one to ask or check ideas with, but who better to ask than lovely readers :P
and dont worry i'm fighting the chiche!!!!!!!!!!!! but it means kinda stuck on the ending lol endings are my bane = =

archangelsteph August 4 2011, 08:01:03 UTC

yes! another jaemin fic
this fic is rather interesting i can't wait to read more and see what happens to the characters ^^

rennie_88 August 4 2011, 13:40:08 UTC

thxx <3 <3 ~ updating noww ~