[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 9

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 9/?
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's betrayed

Comments

[shunluv]

yay new chapter^^
i think i forgot to comment last chapter?

[shunluv]

owh nooooooooooo Jae what have you done *_*

honestly after this chapter im 100% rooting for Yoochun only unless Jae able to redeem himself though kinda doubt it anymore :P
Jae love is not healthy at all and it is purely obsession only to own Changmin..
he keep hurting Changmin non-stop and would end up killing him..
well i still seeing him as psycho here^^;
and it actually his fault to bind Yoomin together lol :P

im on Yoomin team now :P

[rennie_88]

hehe no prob! :)

i dont know what he did either! :O lol
poor jaejoong. its not like he's evil on purpose :S and he's just so cool as a psycho ^^;;;
but i gladly welcome you to darling prince yoochun's side!!!!!!!!! :D hehehe~

thx for sticking around to keep reading this <3 <3

[rikuma]

owh...Jae has finally unleashed his true power??
and the socerrer is waiting for a showdown??

omo uri Changminnie...:((

and Yoomin....??
huhuhu...
but am glad posessive Jae made up for all the heartbroken just now..:))

[rennie_88]

hehehehe but even sweet jae doesnt kno what his power is! what ever is he gona do ~ :P

omg.. are u heartbroken cuz of yoomin??? TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT oh dear.. i'll have to go wwrite more jaemin in a diff story for you -0-;

[rikuma]

jumps mad like the hatter!!!!!!
"yeay....now writing it down in my diary so that whenever i'm down i could anticipate this!!!...:))"

[rennie_88]

hahahaha!!! yes u crazy (hatter) girl~ :) of course i could do it for u, u'd just have to tell me detailed what u wwant :P

[rennie_88]

wow, im so happy you said that! thank you! i was worried it would be a weird twist, but hoping it all works out ok~ :)
im really liking strong changmin too, because taht's really what makes the jaemin dynamics here ^^
yeah, poor yoochun just keeps getting into trouble XD i guess he's an angst magneet or something ~~
i'll be bringing in a junsu pov part soon! i hope it wont disappoint ~
thank u for reading and taking the time to comment <3 <3 :)

[artsytartsy16]

omg what just happend?!?!?!
changmin just got seriously injured by jae. so worred.
jae life is a freakin mess.
he likes changmin.
he hurts changmin.
changmin hates him.
his dad hates him.
and now hes got an ice monster inside him. but hey, now we know why his dad put a bind on him. (i could be wrong about this though cuz im not a very competent reader)
I love jae's attraction to changmin though.

[rennie_88]

yap, u summed it up nicely :) hehe everything is a mess, but its only gona be moooree messy soon -0- a lot of things to work through hehe
i'm sure you're more than a competent reader! i just dont give you all the information you need and keep a lot of secrets :X !
jaemin is always just amazing in every way even if one of them is psycho :)
thank u for reading and taking the time to comment!! <3 <3 more coming soon :D

[dreaming_col]

Ohmygosh, JaeJae~!! T____T On one hand, it sucks that he hurt Min so badly, unintentional or not. On the other... well. All his true powers are starting to come out, aren't they? Now he just needs to realize that his father is going to ruin him, ruin Changmin, ruin EVERYTHING, and use those powers to take the psycho out. No matter what ends up happening with JaeMin, that one thing really does need to happen. XD

And Minnie~~~ So proud of him to see that he's still got all that fight and strength in him. At the same time, though, you have to start wondering how much longer he can keep that up. Everyone's got a breaking point somewhere, and I wonder how close Changmin is to his... :/

[rennie_88]

jaejoongs life is just painful kekekekeke theres a lot thats supposed to happen before he realizes he doesnt like dear daddy but ur right, it has to happen :P tho he's kinda a psycho himself right? XDD

oo yes. breaking points kekek lovely lovely things for angst *_* lol~ once i get back around to min's pov (which i already wrote most of wohoo !XD) ill be going into that for sure ~ def if chunnie never appeared in his life he'd prolly do down sooner than later ~

(dang really feel like writing after reading ur update too and so sad its time for bed TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT *cry*)

[dreaming_col]

Jae is a bit of a psycho, but that really can't be blamed on him. And he's at least showing glimpses of it not being a permanent condition yet. There's still hope for him, which is what I'm latching on to. XD

I know~~~! I love breaking points and pushing my characters right up to their's. And in the YunChun fic I'm planning, even beyond it and then it all ends in tragedy. But, yes, I'm definitely excited to see how Min's really dealing with all of this. And where, exactly, you're going to put his breaking point. ^^

[rennie_88]

"permanent condition" LOL that sounds very dangerous and bad and i dont think i could bear doing that to him XDD im slowly figuring out a way for him to sorta change himself by the end at least. :)

hehehehe we are so evil to enjoy these things but realy. ur so right XDD breaking points is so..interesting and intense and lovely T^T;; tho not sure if the way im gona do min's here will be satisfying or not :S ok. wait. what are u talking about tragedy yunchun?? :O