[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 10

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 10/?
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's

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[dreaming_col]

I hope Yoochun wakes up and tells Junsu alllllll about Changminnie and that Junsu gets to see exactly what his cowardice has done to someone that considered him a best friend. XP ... Is that bad of me? XD Either way, I hope we find out the whole backstory of how Su dug himself into this hole soon. Because until we know that, I can't - no matter how badly a little part of me wants to - feel bad for him. :/

Ugh, really, I just want all the answers now~~!! I'm going crazy here, dear. If I am going to give you Min torture-revenge, you gotta throw me a bone in return. XDDDD

[rennie_88]

spiteful pleasure of revenge! its satisfying hehehe :) im gona have fun dealing it out on poor su. and here i wasn't intending for anyone to feel bad for him at all XD just to happily present him starting to go crazy puahahahahahaa

hehe i'd give u more than a bone no questions asked haha~ tho i told u pretty much what happens..its just really diff when its written out right? XDD

[dreaming_col]

Intending or not, there is a part of me that wants to feel bad for him. Just because it's obvious how much he really does care for Chunnie. Plus I know how much it sucks to be in a situation that you basically got yourself into, even though it wasn't with malicious intent, and not know how to get yourself out of it. Granted, I never got myself in THIS much trouble, but still. I can understand.

It's compleeeeeeetely different when written out~! You told me the basics, but I keep thinking of all the little detail questions. Where is Min's breaking point (as we've discussed)? How exactly will he break when he hits that point? How will Chun find out about what Su did to Min? How will Jae ever realize what/who he truly is AND that his father needs to be slowly liquefied from the inside out? (Okay, that last part was a bit graphic, but you get my point. XD) Just... yeah. The devil's in the details. :D

[rennie_88]

yea exactly ~ i couldn't make him actually bad/evil inside so def just a case of bad choices piling up and even worse cuz they have even bigger repercussions :P

its actually helping me a lot that ur asking the small detail questions cuz i gota make sure my outline is all in the right order etc! :S uhh what would it actually BE to be liquefied from inside??????? O_O EWWW lolol

[n3uromanc3r]

Oooh the parts in Jaejoong's point of view are always so intense, I really liked the previous chapter! But this one was also very interesting, I'm dying to know more about the sorcerer's plan, because it turned out he really was aware of Yoochun's escape from the castle!

And also the YooSu interactions are always so heart-breaking. Despite everything he did against Changmin I can't hate him. The way he looks at Yoochun, how he thinks of him tells he's a good boy. How Yoochun begged him to stay by his side, how those words let him feel needed was so reassuring, but the mentioning of that certain name seemed to crushed everything in him. Although after seeing the sorcerer in the castle again (I believe he saw him when they were about to kill the prince, right?) he should have expected Changmin will appear again sooner or later...

I can't wait for the next chapter!

[rennie_88]

:) jaejoongs parts are fun and easy to write cuz they are so overly dramatic and crazy and everything XD
i think the sorcerer has too many plans now ~ X-X

yea its very true about junsu/yoosu.. junsu's really not a bad person :( but he's just going down hill hehehe

thank you <3 im having so much fun with this ~

[toni_luv]

BOOM!!!!!!!
In your face! Junsu! In your face!!!!!
Anyway.
Reading this slowly. Trying to, without people disturbing me.
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What in the world is going through the sorcerer's mind! His son and the crown prince Yoochun both want Changmin. What aura does this kid have to draw both to him? Whatever! The two both heed warning if things don't follow through the kids death is on their hands. You know Junsu even if caption Lee trifles you it's your word against his to condemn him to exile. Ayes. He'll bring in the real royals to rain on his power raid another double edge on both their heads. Jaejoong stooped low begging for his back.. he knows his father too well he doesn't give a damn about the outcast boy. Just another leverage to the imposter prince, his son and now prince yoochun. he's more use then. Oohh I'd love to see his face when yoochun awakes. quick where's the popcorn at .. t his is going to be good.

[rennie_88]

haha~ oh no i hate when ppl bother me when im reading TT! make them go awaaayy~~

changmin is just irresistible :) but very much being used because of it kkk
hahaha omg popcorn sounds good :D
thx for commenting <3 and hope that u like what happens next ~~

[rennie_88]

hahahaha~~ wohooo i like how u think girl :P! then i dont have to feel guilty for doing weird crap to junsu XDD and we shud make sure some good onesided love heart-break is one of the things he has to suffer ~chunnies out of his league kk

yaaaaayy more yoomin love + support hehe tho def jaemin vs yoomin will continue for sure, its so great to like them both, right? :P (but no kidding, this is a secret but u are kinda hitting close to the mark with the shipper comment LOLOL cuz..um WHY NOT? XDDD )

i'm trying to get next chap up this weekend :) comments like urs make me really motivated too hehe
thank u so much for saying that TT i feel so touched and happy that u like it and are following this fic <3<3 thank u again~ *hugs* hope i dont disappoint with what comes next ~
but good luck on ur exams!!!! FIGHTINGGG!!

[shameless_muse]

O.O wooo!
I get lost for a while and you update TWO CHAPTERS!
Anyway, they all satisfied me well ^^
I wonder what's inside Jae that caused him to loose control like that... And what Junsu will do next.
Omg, this is soo interesting *gets excited*
Thank you so much for this chapter :DD

PS: you're right, last chapter was really looong~
PPS: I think I didn't comment the chapter before this one T^T sorry about that..
PPS: can I make it up for you with something?

[rennie_88]

haha~ glad ur not lost anymore :)
thank u for saying so, im really really happy u like it <3 im always hoping that the weird plot changes are not disappointing XDD
jaes secret wont be completely revealed till the end but u are free to try and guess along the way hehe

ps: my chapter length standard is very messed up these days XD
pps: its OK<3 thank u for commenting on this chap :P hehe
pps: im just happy that ur following this despite the long wait between updates <3

[shameless_muse]

Oh, I'm touched :')
I'll be waiting for the next chapter with a smile one my face :D
<3

[rennie_88]

awwe u are so sweet! *hugs*<3 <3 thank you and i'll try my best :P ~~