[Fic] The Three Kisses - chapter 11

[rennie_88]

Title: The three kisses
Pairing(s): Everyone/Changmin
Length: Chaptered (11/?)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: drama, romance, angst

Summary: Someone’s writing Changmin love letters. How’s he supposed to identify his admirer when all four of his band mates seem like the one?

A/N: this scene was part of the story plan since the beginning, so plz dont hate me for

Comments

[changmin_amour]

shooot. i was hoping for a second there, when yunho said he was lying about liking changmin. and then... noooo. why does everything have to be so complicated???
thank you for the update! but ack, im dying now..

[rennie_88]

:X !!!! its complicated cuz there's too many feelings and emotions gushing everywhere TT i'm sorry about it.. TT but dont worry.. i will dispose of yunho accordingly X_____________X!!! LOL

[rennie_88]

next chapter is up~:) sorry its been too long again T^T

[jaeminism]

I am kinda angry with Min after reading this chapter... Why did he lie to Yunho in the 1st place... Why is he so vulnerable? I know he didn't want to hurt Yunho... But those three words made him that weak? How will Yunho face him the next day did he think about it before doing that to Yunho? I can't even blame him... He is so confused and all... Ugghhh... this is so frustrating...:S

[rennie_88]

:( i know...it will work out though so please dont be too angry with what they did! T^T~

even tho min did seem a little weak/confused here, but based on personal experience i made him like that on purpose because it can really be like that in real life when ur caught up in the moment and someone u care about but dont love confesses to you...:X !and because he cares so much about yunho it's ten times harder to say something hurtful directly even if its the truth. (i changed this scene a LOT tho, cuz u would have KILLED me if u read the original version XDDD hahahaha~)

the next chapter is supposed to be jaemin finally talking about things, so i hope that will make up for this <3 thank u for reading still :)

[shunluv]

sorry to butt in but im super curious with the original version,do you still keep them?
if you do would you send to me pretty please???????

[rennie_88]

haha~~ butting in is more than cool :P

i think i still have the original version saved (i'll check!) but its shorter and doesn't fit into this plot at all anymore really

of course i dont mind sending it to you, just hope u wont be unhappily surprised with what happens XD

[rennie_88]

HELLO you <3!!

been a while since i got to read your amazing comments <3 :) *happy*

(sorry for grammar ~ dont have beta and when something sounds wrong i get frustrated and just leave it wrong lol :S)

yes i remember how u mentioned the jaemin aura before! and thank you for noticing it again cuz i tried so hard to make it obvious that poor changmin really cant love anyone but jaejoong regardless of what he himself thinks his own feelings are. he is young and everything is a first for him here...
even tho he decided in his head to just 'be friends' with jaejoong, he's gona have a hard time actually doing that of course cuz he's pretty much failed to 'stop' his feelings which is impossible to do anyway hoho~ :P

^^;; oh im so happy and flattered that u liked the homin!! this is how i wanted it to happen from the beginning so im really happy to hear that u appreciate what i tried to show here~ <3 thank you hehe

[rennie_88]

yunho being 'mature' is the exactly perfect word, as well as the lovely way you explained them as somehow mirrors of each other, thank you~^^ i really enjoy reading your thoughts and the way that you understood my writing, and all the details that stood out to you personally because different things stand out to different people ~ but it always feels like you tend to get it better as to what i was trying to put into words and show through a certain scene <3 thank u for being so awesome lol and for leaving me such amazing comments :) *hugs

[rennie_88]

hahahahaha! u so cute :P i hope i can get it posted while its still 2012!! -0-