[Fic] Ballad of the Moon : 12b

[rennie_88]

Title: Ballad of the Moon
Pairing: Jaemin, Yoomin 
Length: Chapter 12/22
Genre: fantasy, adventure, angst,drama
Disclaimer: idea based on goose-girl fairy tale ~

Summary: Changmin has no control over his life as he's forced to leave his home to become the escort of the Crown Prince in a faraway land. Before he can even reach his destination, he's

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[n3uromanc3r]

I couldn't help but I really missed Jaejoong ... although I have to admit those YooSu and YooMin parts were really heartwarming!
Okay, It made me sad how hurt Junsu was when he realized Yoochun didn't share every thought and feeling with him how he used to be and also how Yoochun felt he let those people down by trying to meet Changmin again.

The scene with Changmin on horseback looking somewhat free was so beautiful! I like the cautious interaction between them and how they're slowly getting to know each other!
I wonder if Jae was aware of the visitor, and if Yoochun will appear time to time since it seems he wont be able to rescue Changmin just yet...

I can't wait for the next chapter!

[rennie_88]

weirdly i miss jaejoong too :S next chapter will def have a section from his pov :)
junsu's got bad case of one sided love sigh but he's not what chunnie really needs or is looking for rightt? :P
i'm trying not to rush yoomin but feel like its taking forever huuu...but ur questions will be answered soon ~~ :)
thanks for taking the time to read this huge thing <3 <3 more coming soon!!

[yakuso5u]

Will you stop saying things like Min is 'alive but not living' and 'clipped wings' and 'dead' and all that??? *heart lying in pieces all over the place* ;~;

I'm like... so so SO anxious and relieved yet frustrated and impatient, and ohhh dear... that scene with Changmin riding as fast as he could without being able to escape, it was... wow. *speechless* Brought tears to my eyes, because he was such an amazing person in his life before, and it's like nothing and no one will ever manage to give him that 'unbroken' back (though perfect-but-alone-Min being replaced by damaged-but-loved-Min doesn't sound like a completely bad idea XDDD).

YooMin... <333 They are soooo in their own world. They actually know nothing about each other and yet circumstances already linked them forever, and I can't wait for when the truth will be revealed

[rennie_88]

LOLOL oh yes. i might have over done it on the ripping ur heart apart thing TT *offers tape* :3

hmmm?? wait, where all ur emtions came from..? the anxious/relieved/frustrated/impatient... ? :O hehe thats a lota diff things all at once!!

u kno. this whole thing was supposed to be officially yoomin from the beginning thus all the way they see special things in each other like u mentioned, but jaemin got pissed and forced their way in. but do u think the yoomin is still more...first place sorta? cuz i mean at least they'd never hurt each other and are mutually attracted..even tho poor joongies slowly coming around..oh dear, my heart is so split :( *Dies* anway, still havent quite decided exactly on how it all gets revealed. so many possibilities :P

i miss joongie too tho TT need to switch off jaemin yoomin every time cuz dang they both are driving me crazy XDDD huuu its getting longer every time i duno what to do -0-!! i'm taking up so much of ppls time with this lol~

thank u for taking time to leave this monster comment <3 <3 <3

[yakuso5u]

*sticks heart back together in one pieces sniffing* Thanks... ;~; XD

Lol I dunno where they come from, you tell me, it's all your doing :P

JaeMin forced its way into your story like YooMin forced its way in mine. Makes sense :P So damn competitive, they are XD
Mmmh actually I think the JaeMin feels 'first' at that point... cos Jae clearly mentioned an attraction that was both emotional and physical, and Min started yielding to that pressure too. While the YooMin is progressing slowly, and they just started building something that's not friendship and not love, kinda hard to qualify... you see what I mean?
But I don't think it should be a problem, cos I know you've an idea in mind (more than one, actually :p), and that it'll all end up nicely with YooMin hearts all over the world :P

Commenting marathon!!! Yeaaahhh ^___^/

[rennie_88]

i just wanted to respond to this comment about how jaemin vs yoomin fighting for 'first' and 'second' ~ cuz i think my heart keeps betraying me and making it tip one way and then back the other.. like... its supposed to be yoomin clearly but then jaejoong just crushes it cuz the jaemin is so obvious..even tho i didnt ever really make min understand or really start to like jae in any way yet.. did i?? is there hints of it?? :S i get confused myself cuz so many readers cheer for jaemin and overlook all the negative feelings from him that it affects me back in a circle TT then i feel bad for jaemin and half wana make it work out..LOL what is going onnnnnnnnnnnn~~~~~~~~~~i gota just kick yoomin into romance like NOW keke omo.. wait ch 14 is supposed to have sthg that starts with a ..k..... LALALALALALA!! we shall seeeeeeeee! what is this not friendship not love?? I DONT KNO EITHER !! :B

[ita90]

OMG!!!! O.O This part in the horse, I cried, I really cried. It was so heartwarming, but heartbreaking at the same time. Poor Changmin, he is like a caged animal :(
You done a great job O.O Thank you ^^

[rennie_88]

*HUGS* omgg TT i'm sorry but thank you and i'm happy to know i could get the feelings across well <3 <3 <3 :)
this thing has a dark feeling for me these days :O
thank you again <3 i hope the next chapters are enjoyable too *_*

[ita90]

yes you are really good if you are able to do it ^^
I hope so XD thank you ^^

[rennie_88]

ch 13 updated ~ <3

[harunotenshi]

sorry for only having read this now... i just had a lot of things to do and i was kind of saving this for last~^^ and it paid off.

this was an update that was heavy with feelings of both changmin and yoochun. i still hate junsu btw, he has no right to accuse yoochun of uttering changmin's name in his sleep. it's not his place. changmin should've been there, not him.

yoochun, somehow i can understand his feelings of wanting to escape. it is true that he's not his own anymore be ayaw of the sorcerer. he can't even fight because he's already given up. but then he still has hope, in the form of changmin.

changmin, i really do just want him to be free of the sorcerer's and jaejoong's spell. he really looked like an angel ridin on yoochun's horse~ but like yoochun found out, his wings weren't broken, they've been clipped and unless something happens that would break the spell cast on him, he can never be free.

i wish yoochun would really muster the will to fight and break free. then he can take changmin away from his prison. :(

[rennie_88]

<3 no need to apologize for commenting late~ i'll always be later and slower than everyone!!!! XD hehe
finally updated this ~ its why im replying now after so long ~ whew~

its ok to hate junsu more from now cuz next chapter yoosu starting to break apart ~ and then junsu's karma will bite him :D WOOT!

im glad u understand the way i made yoochun here esp with how special changmin is to him :) im so pushing for yoomin TT lol

sadly min cant be free yet cuz lots and lots of dramatic things to come first :P hehe but we'll see if things will change faster as i write :3
thank you for commenting like always i love to hear your response and reactions <3 i hope you enjoy the next part toooo -0-;

[miruu_kira]

why so suddenly i feel sad for junsu after read the part a? but thinking back for what he already did for changmin i really can't take his side, and and after read the part b....

YOOOOOOMIIIIIIINNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kyaaaaaa love it love it love it!! *forget about junsu* they have their own YOOMIN world and and hope they can stay there, heheheh, yooominnnnnn!!! changmin starting to pour out what he felt to chun?

seems like minnie start thinking of jaejae a lot, hahaha, well it can't be helpe, jae and chun are like part of his life now, and jaejae, everytime he will face him though, XD
aaaahhh my mind just stucked at YooMin and seems can't think for other things, hahahaahha

[rennie_88]

im feeling sorry for junsu too TT cuz he's got no one on his side..all alone and sad and just hurting and going crazy :( *pats duckbutt* i shud just put him out of his misery ..through death? :X and then make him the king in another story LOL XD

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay~ IM SO HAPPY YOU ARE INTO YOOMIN <3<3<3 CUZ ME TOO lol~ yoomin is so sweet in their own world. and fighting to be together against the rest of the world sigh. jaejoong tries so hard to get between them,,but he's already lost right?:P