[Fic] Dare you to move : two

[rennie_88]

Title: Dare you to Move
Pairing: Jaemin
Length: Chapter 2/10
Genre: high school AU,angst,drama
Warnings: bullying. bullying
(Plz don't hate/bash me, there has to be excessive bullying for there to be a bodyguard. :P)

Story request by rikuma, i hope you like it! <3
Summary : Changmin is the loser who everyone bullies at school. He's also the only son of the city

Comments

[natipooh]

didn't like this chapter
why is your changmin so weak?
I thought maybe yoochun would be there to comfort him at the end of the day!

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[rennie_88]

its okay if you dont like it ~ cuz its only the beginning he has to be wimpy and bullied for the whole bodyguard part to be necessary and come in later (which was the fic plot request^^)
he'll learn to stand up for himself later on in the story...tho at this point he's only like 8th grade so he's pretty young and sheltered anyway :S

also i just cut the chapter off there but yoochun does comfort him at the end of his bad day continued in ch 3, no worries ~ keke :P

thanks for letting me know how u felt in your comment tho! i appreciate u took the time to mention it instead of just blowing it off and not reading <3 :)

[natipooh]

don't take me too seriously. I meant "I don't like how the story goes" not the way you write it.
It's just I don't see Changmin so terribly weak so as not to even say something as an answer to the bullies.
I understand it's for the sake of the story ;-)

I'll be waiting for the tears and the comfort yoochun will provide.

Question: what happened to Junsu? I thought these 2 were on the same school but now changmin left??? noooo I want MinSu to be weak together!! T_T

[rennie_88]

aha~ thank u for explaining! i dont like him so weak either but it leaves him lots of room for growth :P

i didn't realize i didn't explain clearly ~ :( 'm sorry its confusing haha i shud edit the chapter~!! he meets junsu in his new school~ at the beginning its a scene from the new school in the present then i went back in time to show his background story :S ..ahhTT

[rennie_88]

hehe those jerky kids will get their lesson when jaejoong comes into the story :P!! and lots of protection for min too ~

hahahaa~ its ok im the same as you these days.. lots of people abusing changmin XDD but i promise happy lovely ending of jaemin <3 <3

[reya13]

[rennie_88]

yeah :X !! they'll get punished later by jae :p hehe

[harunotenshi]

poor changmin... he's back to square one... only now it's worse cause he doesn't know what to expect from his new school mates. what will his father do when he sees changmin tho? but will changmin even allow himself to be seen by his father in such a state?

gonna go read the next chapter~^^

[rennie_88]

hehe ur questions will be answered next chapter !! go go~ <3
uhhg tho, starting a new school is always yucky and scary, but worse with evil bullies T^T

[yakuso5u]

Damn..... damn damn damn >_< Daddy has very respectable and honorable ideas but he put his son in the middle of quite an ugly mess ;~; Now you already told us just how bad it'd become so I'm hoping for MinSu next chapter...? XD (no suspense at all, will know in ten minutes).

My heart goes out to Changmin... can more or less relate to some of the feelings you're describing here, and it's not easy to understand how unsurmountable the simplest things become once you're caught in that kind of vicious circle, instead you've experience it >__> Changmin fighting!!! \(^o^)/

(and thanks for posting this so fast!! Boydguard-bullied represents fascinating pairing dynamics and I know you let me down with that xD)

[rennie_88]

lmao! the suspense will catch up to you when u have to wait for the new chapter XDDD

the angst is already flowing XDD but hes like 13 -15 here so hopefully iits suitable age appropirate angst :P

( i hope i can deliver and not let you down *_* its still all sparkly and exciting in my head too haha!)