[Fic] Dare you to move : three

[rennie_88]

Title: Dare you to Move
Pairing: Jaemin
Length: Chapter 3/10
Genre: high school AU,angst,drama
Warnings: bullying. bullying
(Plz don't hate/bash me, there has to be excessive bullying for there to be a bodyguard. :P)

Story request by rikuma, i hope you like it! <3
Summary : Changmin is the loser who everyone bullies at school. He's also the only son of

Comments

[rikuma]

aww...???
what happened??
what did his dad do??
owh and i had half a mind that the other was Jaejoong...
that maybe Chanmi's dad hired an extra bodyguard without him knowing and maybe he was instructed to be Chanmi's friend and protect him secretly...
whoah..:))

[rennie_88]

wow ur fast! haha
(honestly i dont know what his dad did...XD i couldn't think of something, so let's say its not very important cuz they'll still bully him anyway ToT!!)
joongie's coming next finally oooooooo~ <3 but ur right, he will be secret without min knowing~ :)

[rikuma]

true2...
owh it's okay we'll just stop harassing our pretty little-changmin-filled-heads and just focus on the Jaemin coming i guess..:))

[rennie_88]

:) yep *pets changmin's pretty head* jaemin sorta makes everything else just fade away hehe

[reikonan]

i'm glad changmin made a friend, but damn! those kids really are mean... >.< i hope that they'll go to the police or something cause that's just too much.

[rennie_88]

nerdy minsu friends is just too cute <3 ~
hmmm its true, they should go to the police... or jaejoong can kick their butts for touching his precious minnie:P hehe

[natipooh]

what?????
I'm seriously confused now.
Please clarify the story for me? Either there are some mistakes here in this chapter or I got it totally wrong from the start and will have to re-read everything -__________________-
I mean he went to school with Junsu, then he changed schools and now he meets Junsu again???

Also, can you please clarify this paragrapah?
"Deep down Changmin knew Yoochun really cared for him, but given the day he’d suffered through, given the state of his body, his emotions, he couldn’t see anything but the way Yoochun had lied to him. Denied him. Rejected him. Pretended to like and care for him, given Changmin unrealistic expectations and hopes, caused him a whole slew of emotions he didn’t understand, all when really Yoochun was just doing his job."

what do you mean with Yoochun lying to him or rejecting him??

[rennie_88]

no you didn't get it wrong ! i originally wrote these 3 chapters as one long thing so it made more sense..but as i mentioned in the other comment, there is the present time at the new high school where junsu is, and the past story at the old school where he got beat up. thank for letting me know though, so i can go back and make it clearer :)

oh~ basically yoochun didn't actually lie or reject him, but thats how it feels to changmmin because he has a big crush on him. so when yoochun takes care of him changmin thinks he's only doing that because its his job. and he was upset after getting hurt so he was angry and blaming yoochun for fist making him fall for him and then not 'caring/loving' him the way he wishes him to. does it make sense? :S

[crimson_miharu]

I wonder what his dad did. Obviously those fools should at the very least realize that at the very least Min's dad is more powerful than their fathers if he could get them into trouble and embarrass them with as little as a phone call and no appearance. If it was me I wouldn't fuck with Min again but then again these guys are idiots and have this air of entitlement about them...I hate people like that, that think the world is theirs and it's their duty to put people in their place. I've had a few unpleasant run in's with people like that and while the encounters made me laugh I won't lie and say I didn't take great pleasure in watching them get what they deserved :D

[rennie_88]

i dno what his dad did honestly XDD hahahaha yes, they are stupid so they will just dig their own graves :P yeah those types of people are very unpleasant, but they never really get away with things in the end ~~~ and they will have to pay when joongie finds what they do to his sooon to be precious minnie *_* !!

i always think of minsu as awkward and unconventional..the unlikely pair, so it seems to fit here ~ :P but really, i dont think i could make his parents or chunnie mean to him in any way after all the bullying.TT there has to be some good things in his life ~ but that's true, min will have to grow up a little bit ^^

thank u for ur lovely long comment :) <3 next part coming soon ~

[paoktsou]

Jae finally appeared?!!!!! yeeeyyy
my body is ready for JaeMin !!!

[rennie_88]

oops. at the end it was junsu!
jae comes in the next chapter with a big fancy entrance hehe :P im so ready for jaemin too, lets gooooooooooooooooooooo <3