[Fic] Dare you to move : five

[rennie_88]

Title: Dare you to Move
Pairing: Jaemin
Length: Chapter 5/10
Genre: high school AU,angst,drama
Warnings: bullying. light language
(Plz don't hate/bash me, there has to be excessive bullying for there to be a bodyguard. :P)
Story request by rikuma, i hope you like it! <3

Summary : Changmin is the loser who everyone bullies at school. He's also the only son of

Comments

[rennie_88]

omona~~ i'm finally replying here!! :X its been longer than i thought, and i'm dying as i see the date 2 months ago TT;;;!

thank u so much for reading and commenting though <3 <3 :) i really need to get back into writing and reading, and catch up on your fic tooo *_* !! hehe

oh yea~ the point is, i finally updated this one X_X! ahhh~

[natipooh]

I like the story but there's one thing that bothers me... long descriptions.
I prefer shorter descriptions and more action? I think that the whole MinSu scene was way too long for instance.

Thanks for sharing

[rennie_88]

hello~ thank u for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts and opinions~ :)
i'm aware of my bad habit of long descriptions, but i didn't edit this fic much so its even more like that :S i'm sorry you dont like that, so i appreciate and thankful that you gave the story a try and liked the story anyway :)
sorry too, for replying so late~ but finally updated now X_X

[crimson_miharu]

LMAO! Oh Jae is totally messing with him. Honestly, after reading how Min reacted to him I can't even get mad at Jae for messing with his head. Min's become accustomed to being bullied that his first instinct is to run. I don't blame Su for laughin at him either because that whole scene was funny to me. I'm glad at least this chapter Min's life was threatened and he wasn't beaten within an inch of his life. Is Jisung also the one messing with Su?

[rennie_88]

hellooo <3 ~~ i'm back again from another disappearance XDDD *cry*
sorry for always replying/updating so so late ~ but i always love your comments and appreciate ur time in reading/commenting <3 <3!
updated this story now~ and others too coming soon T^T!

[rikuma]

owh I'm totally late..:((
huhu...
but..."yeah blame it all to my alarm clock...:(("
owh Jaejoong is just testing the water and trying to see how bad is his charge??
haha....
"when he said “Definitely need a raise for this.” "
I was half expecting CHangmin to hear it and think about it...
but...
he was being bullied so I guess it was too much to ask...
but I love Jaejoong's way...
"keke....I think I could love everything Jaejoong now...
cause I already love everything CHangmin...:))
""Adoration level 234567///"

[rennie_88]

omoonaaa TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTt YOU are not late. I AM SO SO LATEE!! alsdjflskdjflkd but its my horrible bad habit and it killed me this time TT i'm sorrieeee *crawling back to bow at your feet*
are you still there somewhere?? we didn't talk in so long~ and i think its my fault for disappearing yet AGAIN X_X!
im writing again though and just updated this one ~ <3 its still yours if you still want it TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTt <3 <3 <3 huhuhuhuhu

[rikuma]

Hahaha..:))
it's okay I'll always be waiting for you...so it's okay..:))
life is just so boring without you so i'll wait...keke...
"pats head..'
And it'll always be mine "makes grabby hand and keeps it tight in a hug....forever mine okay...huhu..."
And is life being all mighty on you again??
"let me at them i'll smack some sense into them to let us gather again....or at least space for you to dream about Changmin..:))"
I hope you still get time out to day dream about uri magnae.keke...
I know i ALWAYS do...keke..

[rennie_88]

life is boring for me too without fanfics and fangirling over minnie gorgous baby man with you T^T haha!!

'mighty life' omgosh thats a PERFECT word for it!!!! D: its hulk!dancing all over me haha XDD *wilt* u can smack it for me many times. even punching and kicking and biting or whatever violence you prefer PlZ!
of course i always have him and the other boys in my head lol its impossible to not think of them for a day u know it right! :P recently been listening to 'fated' every morning lol such cool boys these days *swoon*

[dreaming_col]

Ooooh, Jaejoongie staking his claim already~~ XD

*sighs* On one hand, I wish Jae were a bit more understanding of Min's position and where he's coming from and everything. On the other, I know that's not really his character here, and I can kind of understand his impatience, too. But still. Wouldn't it be easier to protect Changminnie if, I dunno, Min actually trusted him? :/

[rennie_88]

lalalala~~ omgod this was back in feb and now its already april O_O

u are so right tho~ and i think joonngie sorta makes a step towards the understanding/trusting in the next part ~ how did u know wwhat i was gona write when i didnt even kno myself ? XD

[dreaming_col]

It's crazy how fast time goes... :/

Lol~!! I knew because I am JUST that smart. ^_~

[rennie_88]

hahahahhah XD you're just got joongie all figured out and snug in the palm of ur hand hehe