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rennie_88

BYG - Ch 5

Aug 02, 2011 06:17

Title: Before You Go
Pairing(s): Jaemin, Yoosu (later),
Length: Chaptered 5/20?
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: (gang) violence, language, abduction
Genre: AU, drama, angst
Summary: Jaejoong and his cousin have been swept up into the world of violence and gangs. The struggle and fight for his sanity is complicated greatly by the addition of a certain Shim ( Read more... )

genre: au, pairing: jaemin, genre: angst, genre: drama, genre: action, rating: pg-13, length: chapter

Comments 15

vhii1217 August 6 2011, 16:27:17 UTC

finally read this on laptop and not on mobile screen! have longed to leave comment since several chapters back. this story is interesting, some mysteries have unfolded particularly in this chapter (mainly about junsu, yeah?), and vulnerable!changmin is my all-time favourite. obsessive!jae makes it even better.

still intrigued as to what they'll do to escape. keep up the nice (and fast) work!

rennie_88 August 8 2011, 17:08:27 UTC

thank youuuuuuuuuuuu <3 <3 :) ur so sweet hehe

haizul August 6 2011, 18:30:21 UTC

OMGGGGGGGGGGG i'm feeling all warm and fuzzy now XD ♥

rennie_88 August 8 2011, 17:10:46 UTC

woooooooo !! im glad to hear that ;P
i cant write too fluffy or it makes me squeamish TT tho i love to read it lol

whatifgirl86 August 6 2011, 19:27:19 UTC

Wow you update fast:D

Glad that things are moving along nicely for Jaemin. I can't believe I hadn't associated Jaejoong with Junsu before this chapter and to believe that Jaejoong could've met Changmin before all of this happened:)

Looking forward to the next update^_^

rennie_88 August 8 2011, 17:15:07 UTC

hmm i was trying to think abt that and got confused XD lol abt their school and how they didn't meet yet = = it shud be making sense later! hahahah but thx for reading and commenting like always <3 <3

crimson_miharu August 6 2011, 21:16:50 UTC

YAY Im up-to-date!!! Something is definitely off JAejoong. I expected him to be roughed up more a few mosre hard hits or something broken but I'm glad that didn't happen how would he get both him and Min out if he had a broken limb (limbs). Min finally talking to him instead of this mute thing he has been doing that's progress! Can't wait for more!

rennie_88 August 8 2011, 17:16:41 UTC

kekekke exactly! one of them needs to be able to save them!! -0- more jaemin coming soon soon! thx :)

osito_89 August 6 2011, 21:20:50 UTC

yay they talk XD and i dont mind if the chapters are long at all XDDDD
OMG cant wait to see what happens btw this two

rennie_88 August 8 2011, 17:17:50 UTC

kkkkkk omg well some of my later chapters are like.. novels = = tooo long lmao im dying trying to find where to split them~~
but more jaemin action coming chacha!

osito_89 August 8 2011, 22:44:14 UTC

XD cool
well i dont mind at all if the chapters are long >.> LOL