[Fic] Before You Go - Chapter 21

[rennie_88]

Title: Before You Go
Pairing(s): Jaemin, Yoosu
Length: Chaptered 21/?
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: (gang) violence, language, abduction
Genre: AU, drama, angst 
Summary: Jaejoong and his cousin have been swept up into the world of violence and gangs. The struggle and fight for his sanity is complicated greatly by the addition of a certain Shim Changmin into

Comments

[rikuma]

omg urgh i feel like a dummy again it's beautiful how jaejoong would bow soo much just for changmin...:)
what he would do for changmin...:)
it's sweeeeeet!!!!!
just what i need for a rainy day...huhu..
love you for always writing scenes that match my mood...
or maybe it's my mood that matches it...haha...
anyway can't wait for the next entry...
hope it's miles long so that i can drown myself in the jaeminness....:)

[rikuma]

omg...omg i'm first!!!!!
war cry....
or better yet jaemin cry!!!!!!!!
:)

[rennie_88]

hahahahahhaha!!! you deserve something for that :P what would you like?? jaeminnnn?? would that match your mood??? LOL!!!
did you somehow send me vibes across space....?? plz send me some more cuz im greedy.. ahme i mean i need inspiration! :P
hmm well it is rather long.. so i hope its enough to drown in :P

[rikuma]

owh i hope so...
well really there will never be enough jaemin in anything...
huhu...
sorry too greedy too curb when it comes to me and changmin and him being lovable and vulnarable and everything-able....haha...:)

[rennie_88]

heheheh great minds think alike!! and the greatest greatness of vulnerable lovableness is uri changmin *_* ~ huu~ !!!!

[dragonmelodies]

no ~~~~~~ cliff hangers how i hate you right now (not you i hate the literary device). im happy that he gets to see min though, finally, and the more i head about Shim the more i want to chuck a brick at his head >.> i can't wait for the next chapter ^.^

[rennie_88]

im sorrieee~~ it wasn't a cliffhanger,, but i changed it at the last minute TT cuz i hate them too! loll so i'll try to stop writing them XDD hmmm chucking sthg at shim might be fun :) kkk btw updated! <3

[crimson_miharu]

YOu would cut the story there >.>

Mr. Shim is so stupid he honestly thinks he has shaken Jaejoong someone who has committed murder and seen the worst in humans....yeah right..

[rennie_88]

hu yes i know. im being evil i admit it! T^T!!

but poor joongie is getting all messed up and having a hard time keeping up his old ways cuz min changed him~~*_* the touch of love! kakakakakakka XD

[toni_luv]

Mr.Shim, you're just a tadpole compared to big sharks in the tank. Nothing compared to them. You're just a measly sperm. *claps*

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Now I wouldn't say that. Mr.SHIM! *knife pops out of shoe tip and heel* Springs the tip in one guard's balls, round kick heel into ones jugular, shields the first guard while pulls out weapon on the last guard. "You were saying Mr.Shim, you need a book 'How to negotiate with thugs for dummies'" just kidding..

ALL SQUAD LEADERS! TARGET ACQUISITION! PURSUE INTO THE BUILDING!!!! GO! GO! GO!

[rennie_88]

LmaO!!!! "you're just a measly sperm" hahahahahha XDDD ur comments are so entertaining XD!!
but geez, i feel so sorry cuz every chapter is only angst, no action = = whut to do... lol! i think i need to watch some action film to get back in the mood XD!