[Fic] Before You Go - Chapter 22

[rennie_88]

Title: Before You Go
Pairing(s): Jaemin, Yoosu
Length: Chaptered 22/?
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: (gang) violence, language, abduction
Genre: AU, drama, angst 
Summary: Jaejoong and his cousin have been swept up into the world of violence and gangs. The struggle and fight for his sanity is complicated greatly by the addition of a certain Shim Changmin into

Comments

[rikuma]

omg i hate it...:(
i hate that jaejoong is hurt again and again...
there's only so much one can stand for their love...
but this is jaemin love we're talking about so i'm feeling secured..."that and the fact that you're a softie for happy endings too :)" haha...
but anyway i hate it even more that i think i kind of understand what changmin's mom feeling...:(
huhu...
torn between sympatizing with jaejoong and hitting changmin's mom for making him cry or....sitting down and patting jaejoong cause i really understand changmin's mom stand and couldn't find it in me to berate her...huhu...
anyway...changmin fight for your man!!!

[rennie_88]

:( its ok, i feel the same.. i almost wanted to make her on jaemin's side... but her character already was thinking more about other things .. gah~ and jae's getting wimpy is good for minnie to rise and shine ~ lalalalala geez when is the happy ending coming?is it soon? plz tell me, cuz i keep writing angst, what's wrong with me? LOL OTL

[crimson_miharu]

Oh JAe! HE definitely is struggling with a lot right now his emotions are all over the place. Just when you think the mom aint THAT much of itch she shows her true self and even though I still don't think she truly loves and accepts Min, I can see that at the very least and basic she is a mother who worries for her child....

I agree time for Min to grow a pair and fight back and see things for what they truly are. Jae has a reason to worry because based on the lil show his mom put on in front of Min he might think she is accepting of him and Jae when really she is just thankful to have Min back and that's it....

[rennie_88]

i know. TT jae is falling apart on me. -0- time to make someone else (MIN!) rise to the occasion! :P dodododododo~ its up XD

[osito_89]

-_- damn changmins mom is such....>.< cant he let her son be happy with the man im sure she sees loves....>.>...jaejoong dont let people get on your way...XD fight for min...omg! i love your story lol and my jaemin ^^

[rennie_88]

no one can get in the way of the power of jaemin love!!!!! u_u they gona bulldoze everything that gets in tthe way!!!
hmm she's just focused on other things for her son, and falling in love isn't really on that agenda. :( o well, i can always kill her off if you want? LOLLL XDD

[osito_89]

XD OMG...killing min mom...-_- no! she is my mother in law...(LMAO min bias here ) jaejoong would probably kill me if i say that lol

[dragonmelodies]

noooooooo~~~~~~~ why for they part again????? for a moment i thought they'd finally get a break and min's mom would be on their side and they would run away and have their happy ever after in the sunset but then you made them part and made min's mom a bum and now im depressed and i really need to cut this sentence off now cause you know, run on sentences aren't good.
ok rant in now done, i can't wait for the next chapter fu~~~~~
oh and i really do like the idea of stronger min would make thing oh so much easier.

[rennie_88]

they part... so they can meet again? OTL XD! sorry i keep avoiding having to write fluff/love scenes like the plague TT!
but you know, run on sentences make the most sense. cuz we dont think in periods, who needs them? XD
kakaka i updated, so go see waht u think? <3

[rennie_88]

HO HO HO~ all chunnie needs to do is call in the men right?? :O hmm but for now they just are all getting healthy doses of character building... :) .......