Er....wow. The bit at the beginning, with Lanh, that was....wow. Well-done, I say. Very much so. Ali was an interesting addition. And Halle seemed pretty damned pissed. I wonder how the three of them will continue on from here...
Is it wrong that I have so much fun writing gore? Heh heh heh. It kind of needed more cannibalism, but Halle was inclined to use the knife for some reason!
Ali... heeeee. I had no idea that was going to happen, tbh; it came out and I was like OH SHIT, IT'S ALI.
It's not wrong, but...*wince* It was a bit much for my sensitivities. ^^; As for the rest, sometimes things just pop out and all you can do is watch and go WTF, mate? XDD
I mean, it takes some pretty hardcore stuff to warrant a warning in RAG. The only one I can think of that has a violence/gore warning but no dismembering/snuff/whatever is Visual Aid, where Lyle gets his skin peeled in glorious detail. So a warning ought to be sufficient, in theory.
I must say Im awestruck. I have only recently known about this series and finished reading untill the newest one just now, and omg I must confess my love to you. Every writing in the series is very hot and smexy to the max and I have even grown to love characters who didnt get much attention from me. You writing has that kind of power. And characters I liked from the beginning-I love them MORE now. You know how the characters are like and write them so vividly and descriptively as if you really know them in person. And your story of course, has conviction and power as a very well written one. I normally don't go for extreme gore nor cannibalism-ish, but I couldn't stop reading this one and even re-read it for three times, and I'll prolly re-read them over and over again as I re-read your other fics over and over and over. And the way you show what characters feel by only slightly hinting/showing it is just too delicious and should get three stars from Michelin
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I'm glad you find the Alle/Al in RAG to still be true to the Allelujah character!
Part of the difficulty of making a universe where none of the characters are part of the military (and instead lived semi-normal lives not connected to the military in any way) was that in canon most of them had been part of the military/fighting for a long time, one way or another. So for some of them, big changes were necessary, since they weren't in an environment that fostered their base instincts.
In RSA Halle and Alle are kind of the challenge to that, the what-if where Alle doesn't have much desire to be normal and him and Halle continue living life the way they do pre-Anything. It's been a lot of fun to write! Hoping to bring in some of the other characters soon, storyline permitting.
Hi, my name is Auto and I ramble! Thank you very much for this comment--it makes me feel good that people are still discovering, reading, and enjoying RAG.
Oh...oooohhhh! Nicely done. I'm not overly fond of gore, but that scene worked pretty well. And for some reason, Ali's appearance in this 'verse is exiting me quite a bit. He will show up again in a later part, I hope?
I get in certain moods and just want to write gore, heh. tensergorn encourages me, too, so...! Yeah.
Ali's appearance excites me, too. It means that I'll get to bring in some of the other characters and I'm very excited about that! RSA has been very restrictive so far--all I've been able to see clearly enough to write are H/A/L :(
But with this story, I'm seeing more: Ali, Setsuna as Soran similar to how he was in the Soran Al-Saachez verse. I'm hoping with these will come EVEN MORE ahahaha!
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Ali... heeeee. I had no idea that was going to happen, tbh; it came out and I was like OH SHIT, IT'S ALI.
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I mean, it takes some pretty hardcore stuff to warrant a warning in RAG. The only one I can think of that has a violence/gore warning but no dismembering/snuff/whatever is Visual Aid, where Lyle gets his skin peeled in glorious detail. So a warning ought to be sufficient, in theory.
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I'm glad you find the Alle/Al in RAG to still be true to the Allelujah character!
Part of the difficulty of making a universe where none of the characters are part of the military (and instead lived semi-normal lives not connected to the military in any way) was that in canon most of them had been part of the military/fighting for a long time, one way or another. So for some of them, big changes were necessary, since they weren't in an environment that fostered their base instincts.
In RSA Halle and Alle are kind of the challenge to that, the what-if where Alle doesn't have much desire to be normal and him and Halle continue living life the way they do pre-Anything. It's been a lot of fun to write! Hoping to bring in some of the other characters soon, storyline permitting.
Hi, my name is Auto and I ramble! Thank you very much for this comment--it makes me feel good that people are still discovering, reading, and enjoying RAG.
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Ali's appearance excites me, too. It means that I'll get to bring in some of the other characters and I'm very excited about that! RSA has been very restrictive so far--all I've been able to see clearly enough to write are H/A/L :(
But with this story, I'm seeing more: Ali, Setsuna as Soran similar to how he was in the Soran Al-Saachez verse. I'm hoping with these will come EVEN MORE ahahaha!
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